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o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrPostedThis is one of the most cookie cutter one piece stories out here. The MC's kind of bland, honestly my pet rock has more personality. Story filled with so much filler it makes Naruto look modest. It's too much to tell not enough show. MC constantly high on his own farts. Always like "HAHAHA THIS SKILL IS SO OP" it's a little annoying. Comes off as thinking he's smarter than he actually is but doesn't pick up any seafaring skills in a world that's 90% water. Overall this story is just an average one piece fic on web novel. (Pic Unrelated)
- o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrCommented
Honestly if you're looking for ideas for Powers now to use them look up the Superpower Wiki. As for Gravity Manipulation it's has so much combat potential insane. He could even pull a Goku and train under crazy gravity to increase his physical strength and speed. Probably become the god of strength and endurance on top of being the god of war. As for where to take Gravity Manipulation, their stuff like Attraction/Repulsion, Increase/Decrease Gravity, Gravity Constructs, Flight, Gyro-Telekinesis, Density Manipulation, Pressure Manipulation, Black Hole Creation, White Hole Creation.
(A/N: Hey guys! Let me know what you think about the power thing. I don't really know how Gods and their powers are supposed to work, so I'm taking creative liberties. If you have any ideas on power ups or where to take his gravity magic; let me know! The more ideas the better. CK) - o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrCommented
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"Hahhhh... Screw them... I thought things would be different in this world, but it's still the same oppressive society..." - o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrCommented
I think I saw something like this on the Demon and God Wiki.
2.000.000.000 BC: Khaos, God, Azazoth - o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrPosted
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- o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrCommentedWhen Ryan heard the lawyer's name, he couldn't help but take another glance at the lawyer to confirm he wasn't Saul Goodmen.
- o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrReplied to o0_SnakeEater_0oI originally wanted to write a Jedi SI Avengers fic, but the problems of the MCU are too easy for a Jedi to handle. So things escalated from there over and over. The first chapter can be skipped completely without much of a problem. It is the guideline for character creation in the story. If you do read it, feel free to get some dice, roll a character using the guidelines, and see if a character like yours appears later. The character building took inspiration from Jump Chain fics but has my own personal interpretation.
- o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrCommented
The MCU is definitely more powerful than the Canon Star Wars verse. Legends is up in the air. it's been years since I've looked into non-canon material with the exception of Starkiller & Kotor of course. Thor, Doctor Strange, Scarlet Witch, Iron Man, Captain Marvel, Hulk, Vision would violate a 1v1 especially if the blood lusted. I think people tend to overhype the Canon Star Wars verse with the exception of Darth Emperor Palply or The Youngling Slayer (I refuse to watch the rise of skywalker so I don't know how strong he is)
I originally wanted to write a Jedi SI Avengers fic, but the problems of the MCU are too easy for a Jedi to handle. So things escalated from there over and over. The first chapter can be skipped completely without much of a problem. It is the guideline for character creation in the story. If you do read it, feel free to get some dice, roll a character using the guidelines, and see if a character like yours appears later. The character building took inspiration from Jump Chain fics but has my own personal interpretation. - o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrPosted
I like the gist of the story but don't like how it's presented. It's written is bit clunky and all over the place. I feel like this story lacks focus. The story has potential overall as it is right now I feel like it's mid. I also think it's silly that the main character has seen so many years of horrible shit with Tracer for what like centuries or something, and still has a mental breakdown after being reincarnated.
- o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrPosted
Zǎoshang hǎo zhōngguó xiànzài wǒ yǒu bīngqílín wǒ hěn xǐhuān bīngqílín dànshì sùdù yǔ jīqíng 9 bǐ bīngqílín sùdù yǔ jīqíng sùdù yǔ jīqíng 9 wǒ zuì xǐhuān suǒyǐ…xiànzài shì yīnyuè shíjiān zhǔnbèi 1 2 3 liǎng gè lǐbài yǐhòu sùdù yǔ jīqíng 9 ×3 bùyào wàngjì bùyào cuòguò jìdé qù diànyǐngyuàn kàn sùdù yǔ jīqíng 9 yīn wéi fēicháng hǎo diànyǐng dòngzuò fēicháng hǎo chàbùduō yīyàng bīngqílín zàijiàn
- o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrReplied to _oinkchan
Thanks
This book has been deleted. - o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrCommented
Incel Reader: IF YOU PUT YURI IN THE STORY I WILL LEAVE 😭😭😭 Chad Author:
This book has been deleted. - o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrReplied to o0_SnakeEater_0o
Not saying that the story does not have a problem I think it's very melodramatic at points. These comments are kind of goofy and I'm kind of here for it.
But I was really surprised by the number of whiners in the comments, I know it was poorly written, but they complained because the protagonist did not punch his childhood friend's head off - o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrCommentedCh 52 Notice: Go Check Out New Book
- o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrCommented
John Carpenter's The Thing In my opinion it's the perfect horror movie.
Author Note: Suggest shows you want Ryan to produce next in the comments. I will take them all and put them in a poll. - o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrCommentedCh 12 Lucy's Worry, David's Atonement.
- o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrReplied to MitoDraak
Isaac it is
Venelana nodded her head as she glanced at her child, "Since you chose my daughter's name then I will choose our Son's name. Let's see…" She spent some time thinking of a name and smiled, "Izashi… His name will be Izashi Gremory." - o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrCommented
God of Supremacy. The state or condition of being superior to all others in authority, power, or status. Fits for the king of Olympus 👑👑👑
What do you want MC's divinity to be? Nothing too op but very string at the same time. - o0_SnakeEater_0o1yrReplied to o0_SnakeEater_0o
the state or condition of being superior to all others in authority, power, or status.
What do you want MC's divinity to be? Nothing too op but very string at the same time.