Comments of chapter undefined of The System and a Cruel Young Master

TFTC.keep fast better, i don't like read something i already know ...... and where my 18+ scene 😢

I like that you go through these worlds pretty fast. You can stretch the time in his home world a little more. But don't make it too long either, I hope one day to see him become an eternal, omnipotent being.

thanks for the amazing chapter man and looks like Mc has completed his first step in his road to eternity. his bloodline seems broken just by its name, and the fact that there are other legacies around WI make him stronger and by the time he returns to his original world, he should be Dou Wang or if he luck is very good, then Dou Huang. btw how strong is he, Luke in terms of raw destructive power, speed( raw physical speed and speed with his profound energy) and his physical strength, as he gained this new bloodline his parameters must have gone through roof.

I like the Story Pace atm, bc we get to see alot of different cultivation worlds (which have such big world backgrounds that it would take years to complete in a slow paced story) so pls keep the pace and just have some interactions like with cang yue in between and some lemons here and there, but fast pace the blring stuff :)

do whatever you like man, just dont make mc share anything with anyone and better if he kills his master too.

I really hope he doesn’t kill Jasmine, she’s be far more helpful alive rather than dead.

Nice , is he going to kill jasmine ?

Thanks for the chapter. Make sure he go to some low-level world after this to destress.

Good chapter

thanks

Thanks for the update

nice stroy

Will he ever go to the world of Reverend insanity, and would please make t him advanced science and such since inscriptions are like code to a program, he can make a furnace that refine high quality pills on its own, but most importantly baby steps dear author, you are doing a phenomenal work.

I personally enjoy both types, although I prefer the current format, a bit of a slow pace and summary of the facts, because if you use the slow pace all the time at some point in the fanfic the story will stall, so I think it's better as it is now, though it depends on how you feel comfortable writing. This is just my opinion as a reader. You can try and vary. I don't know if I managed to express myself, I used the translator

Good chapter

Nice,

Thanks for the chapter. I think pace is good but WHERE IS MY LEMON!!!

Current writting style is gud ..

I think the beginnings of "new worlds" can be slower paced (so to find out where he is etc. maybe get aclimated enjoy the world for 1-3 chapters and than you can slowly skip after he cleaned up the beginning.) The question is always where will he get stronger and how will he handle those situations. (like do we need the tournament to know he is the strongest and what does he gain from it?) well to travel to a different continent and other legacy it might be interesting but not needed he can travel by himself and not be exposed in addition he won`t gain enemies along the way. that is a benefit of knowing the plot to avoid potential dangers the original MC would face because of decisions he maes