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Comments of chapter undefined of Herald of Steel

Blacklotus
BlacklotusLv12Blacklotus

This was an amazing start! As a suggestion, make more clear from the beginning on which side the mc is fighting from.

Texteel
TexteelLv5Texteel

Im not a fan of this kind of start. A bunch of names are thrown around, and I have 0 reason to care about any of them. I pretty much skipped, or at best skimmed these chapters. I identified teh intented main character, and compeltely disregarded everything else. I dont care about Huxalamapsimus, the Arch-Elder of the Stackenblocken.

Dennis_Clark_9928
Dennis_Clark_9928Lv14Dennis_Clark_9928

This entire first battle just seemed forced and like total non sense for no reason. I mean the main character isnt even in more than like 2 chapters of the first few. Him being a slave is also pointless and just lazy explaination/backstory.

Viriti
ViritiLv3Viriti

the general really doesn't seem deserving of his position aha

Heisenberg4k
Heisenberg4kLv13Heisenberg4k

thanks for the chapter

Blind_Skimmer
Blind_SkimmerLv2Blind_Skimmer

So far as I had read 10 chapters. The story seems alike with another novel named "Mediterranean Hegemon of Ancient Greece". is this considered Plagrialism?

PoorReader
PoorReaderLv15PoorReader

Is this story the author's take on Alexander the Great? As young Alexander was taught by Aristotle...

Weluvfries
WeluvfriesLv13Weluvfries

Is just me or did else just figure out which side Alex was on

iTz_Hades
iTz_HadesLv3iTz_Hades

This defeat seemed a little too forced to me. A LOT of things had to go wrong for it to happen and it all conveniently happened one after the other out of nowhere.

Rappel
RappelLv15Rappel

reminds me of my latin course in school

JYGT
JYGTLv6JYGT

Good chapter!!

Daoist8u5AgG
Daoist8u5AgGLv1Daoist8u5AgG

Тысячи всадников растоптаны из-за чего? Одной молнии и дерева? Не перебор ли?