Weluvfries
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Weluvfries4mthCommentedMagic people
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Yeah I think this is going a bit overboard.
[Race: Ancient Primordial Origin System Infinite Void Being+∞] - Weluvfries4mthCommentedIn the strongholds, some parents or guardians would strongly refuse to release their kids just to court death because on the premises that the implantation fails, they will die without a doubt and even if they successfully survive the transplant, they still have to face life and death situations before they grow in strength at a regular speed.
- Weluvfries4mthCommentedThe dropships released an entire company of star marines per vehicle, while some of them even carried tanks and mobile artillery, which immediately began to make their way through the planet's surface and towards the nearest hostiles.
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I think the author should define what type of countermeasures they are using
To which he heard a simple snicker over the line, and nothing else. Erich then piloted his starfighter through the atmosphere of the planet, where he immediately noticed that he was locked onto by the local AA. Hypersonic missiles were launched in his direction, to which he responded by activating his countermeasures, and then, aiming the plasma cannon which was mounted on a gimbal beneath the nose of his starfighter towards the location of the installment. - Weluvfries4mthCommented
Question what were all his abilities again? I remember that telepathy and Cyberkinesis were one and the same. Then the seven seconds into the future thing. But what is the third ability?
Thus Erich had an enormous advantage over his rivals due to his ability to control machines with his thoughts, and his ability to see seven seconds into the future. However, in a battle royale that consisted of thousands of hostile starfighters, anything could happen, especially since he was not the only one with a few tricks up his sleeve. - Weluvfries4mthCommented
Grooming at its finest
"I heard from a rather reliable source about a Black Sun pilot who was a mutant like us, but because of his achievements on the battlefield, the party permitted him to have a wife and children." - Weluvfries4mthCommented
Or you could just ditch them and be better off but whatever.
Out of the four friends, only Erich had made it to a Cadet Officer rank, and because of this, the rest of the guys would have to rely on him, if in the future they ever encountered another situation like the one they were just forced to endure. - Weluvfries4mthCommented
*Where
His dad's brow raised in confusion and concern, "How did you get so much money from?" - Weluvfries4mthCommented
Vocab I have seen way too much beauty in two chapter always try to avoid using uncommon words more than thrice.
A picture-perfect image of gentle female beauty that I have only ever seen artificial intelligence come close to creating.detailRiches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!Fantasy · MotivatedSloth - Weluvfries4mthCommented
Huh?
"*ome"detailRiches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!Fantasy · MotivatedSloth - Weluvfries4mthCommented
*that even
Years of escaping from the harsh reality into the simpler worlds of the novels paid off with my instant wariness towards the potential appearance of a certain kun from Japanese modern folklore. Thankfully, for how shoddy my rented studio was, it was entirely made out of reinforced concrete, a barrier even a speeding truck would struggle to penetrate.detailRiches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!Fantasy · MotivatedSloth - Weluvfries4mthCommentedLaki was a big city with several million residents. It was a city that was alive all day, with crowded shopping malls, and bustling restaurants.
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We’re not even passed chapter 3 and yet we have encountered almost 4 cliches bro I don’t have high hopes for this novel.
Unfortunately, he ended up taking the first spot in class, turning him into the number one bullying target. Being an ordinary student without noteworthy background was certainly not helpful at that time. It made things worse as his classmates grew jealous of him. - Weluvfries4mthCommented
*but
Because darkness hides everything the night sees all. - Weluvfries4mthCommented
A lil bit too fast slow your roll my friend you pacing is getting a little to fast.
'This boy…his strength is S rank too?' - Weluvfries4mthCommented
I think celebrities would be better here big shots is like powerhouses in cultivation novels it’s a bit overused.
"Why are all these big shots showing up today?" - Weluvfries4mthCommented
That was clean great job author putting real Greek lore in here
Zeus seemed slightly fearful of this woman, as evidenced by his respectful tone when speaking to her. "A-Are you sure you-"