What a completely pointless backstory. 1st chapter & its already bad....

Chapters are way to short...

Not worth continuing, clearly gonna be forced plot the whole way....the essence of the fighter fits of meeren & a coliseum is essentially the same. To act like this is some never before seen idea is just plain lazy & frankly stupid. Even after all the pointless info dumps have been removed, this is still bad.....

There is alot copy & pasted basically straight from various wikis. The MC house isnt original....its based of House Vhassyl but auther changed the name to something dumb like Natale which doesnt fit the setting at all....Kinda just comes off as a wish fufillment novel that wishes it was a kingdom building novel....

This is pretty entertaining ngl lol. Never seen a pirate group naruto novel either.

Baton is lame af & over exaggerated...

This Ice soul bs honestly kinda ruins the story....People with powers were supposed to be rare. Now every single county/town will likely have dozens for "Plot purposes". This makes for a really lame superpowers novel, it was supposed to be about survival in the apocolypse but now it just seems like low quality chinese xmen....

Plot has simply gotten dull & extremely forced.....

Thought this story was supposed to be about an Ice Age Doomsday.....this lame plot has simply devolved into discount xmen.....disappointing story development overall....

A range of 10 miles is utter nonsense. There is no firearm in existence with that range. A high powered sniper rifle you could get about a mile......but TEN! completely retarded & is obvious the author just tossed out a random # with zero research or knowledge of fire arms.

Lame OC name, doesnt fit setting at all....

This plot is so forced its clearly not worth continuing. Narration is equally terrible....

Dont bother, the following chapters were just as bad....

Lame start

Hit the nail on the head bro. Ive literally never seen a worse bastardization of this series than this utter BS fanfic.

This MC is so unlikeable its mind blowing honestly....

This is reallyyy bad....story just feels completely forced. MC returning all buddy buddy aswell is BS. Definetly dropped!

This story is completely inconsistant garbage, definetly dropped.

So why is terumi mei even a PoV.....shes not even the Kage yet at this time.....is the author paying attention at all????

Story has gotten boring & full of filler....