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Comments of chapter undefined of The Breaking of Fate [High Quality]

Sora_Matsukaze
Sora_MatsukazeLv4Sora_Matsukaze

Chato.

HaremHater10
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Almost nothing happened lol,

Secondworldgod
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The mc is just too pathetic, he can't stand it if something is not going according to its plan, And got mad that someone didn't fall in love with him... Pathetic to the core

Maxime_Lemay
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The autor is really obsessed by kiyomi

Grenhaer
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:(

batuhan
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this fiction keep going to become like a chinese novel with each chapter. Just because it is not wish-fullfillment harem story, doesn't mean its "high quality". Wiki-like informations, two-dimensional dialogues and plain characters without emotions. Along with weird plot, its poorly made.

OLB
OLBLv3OLB

pathetic pathetic pathetic pathetic pathetic

Shivam_Thakur_1883
Shivam_Thakur_1883Lv11Shivam_Thakur_1883

hey hey could you make our mc less evil and ideefrent ... It would be nice if he would lesss involve innocents in his illogical hypocritical revange....... I already don't like mc as he despise every unfurtunate charater(like sasuke or naruto) and act like as if he is only right and logical person............. A little character development would be good here

uplifting_exorcist
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~ Thanks for the Chapter ~

Negan_5785
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The increase of power just having hiz eye back is stupid. You dont get faster for that. Also if this characters are so strong now, whats would be their level with the Juubi?

Jack_Frost_3962
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Nice chapter

ArdaPendragon
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Thanks for chapter

Herohero
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Thank you for the chapter but when There will have the fight ?? ( I can’t wait)

ruben_petit
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gracia por el capitulo

zeraf
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thanks for the chapter

BAM_AMVS
BAM_AMVSLv4BAM_AMVS

ths for the chap