Comments of chapter undefined of The Breaking of Fate [High Quality]

Don't make him Like a arrogant Chinese youth, annoying to see

I felt that the chapter was more about how shinobi learn ninjustu then the actual chapter the whole thing was about showing off Konoha and it’s ninjas, and then running away in a flash.

This fight was wasnt well written it went from 0-100 to 100-0 the whole time, you dont need to explain every new Jutsu indepth it takes out the Momentum out of the Fight mabye write it in Action like, "Choza thins and you can see Butterfly Wings coming out of him". Of course not that bad written, but I hope you get what i mean.

this chapter is awful...too much "water"! When I started reading, I thought that I would give some power stones even if the chapter is average... but this chapter is too terrible. Not only is he made up of "water" for the most part, but he didn't even kill anyone... Disdainful (if he were weak, he wouldn't have been spared).

Please I want to see the P.o.v of Zetsu ,obito, tsunad, naruto

Why would the village even care like most of the main clan is dead for their unfair practices and only the branch member and the strongest hyuga is alive so why would they choose to side with the evil and losing side and there is no such rule in konoha most clan matters are handled by them only so they shouldn't and wouldn't care if neji kills the main branch or not if it was danzo then maybe he would choose to kill mc and control hyuga but not tsunade

It's not like he didn't want to kill Hiashi out of pity or something, but the man just ran off! And he also needs him alive if he wants to steal his chakra source for himself later.

Thanks for the chapter

So he will always keep tenseigan active ? To avoid cage seal and to increase mastery and chakra capacity. Hmmm maybe he will seal the huge tenseigan containers inside him. I hope we get to see him in 4 ninja war. Maybe dude will get a pardon or he will just leave the dimension(if tenseigan allows that)

Thanks for the chapter

great chapter

Author, thank you so much for the chapter and for the regularity of posting chapters! I really liked this story, though I didn't think I would like it at first, since I've never read Naruto fanfics where the main character is in Neji's body. I liked in your fanfic its brevity and logic of the main character's actions, also I'm impressed by his personality and character. The story itself is good in that 'Neji' doesn't fixate on Naruto and Sasuke and doesn't change the canon much - he has his own way. I'm interested to see how Naruto and the other characters react to his power. So the author don't drop this work and most importantly finish it

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter 👌

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the update

I feel like ive just read all the interesting stuff already... He can easily beat anyone already...

Thanks for the chapter