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this is the part which I do not like about the protagonist.He is too kind. he should have killed the old dog becoz of all he did. the entire story just shows that he had not learned his lesson after what happened with his daughter. After everything he did he got a free pass just because he was a relative
thanks for your hard work. the story is still good, and all I just disagree on is how easy the grandfather got away with everything. it was very childish behavior. yeah, he depressed about it, but if he doesn't cut a finger or something off as to punish himself, anything else with this grandfather is pointless. he should feel bad that he is a crappie person without knowing it was his grandson on far he went for no reason at all. he didn't evaluate the Mc himself. didn't talk to see if the Mc had bad intentions. he just went straight to violence like a petty child.
Well we al knew he was a legitimate hevenglow, it was quite obvious. So Rio should take lily to the Empres vila now, time for a harem met up. The crazy old man should have his position stripped as a way of punishment. Looking forward to the next chapters. PS: Aliyah took far too long to show up, she should be aware of what the crazy old man did before Rio already, but she showed up at the last moment. Just my opinion.