golden rule you loose you mind you loose your life.

Mal should had known if the girls go into harms way there's harm there . no battle is risk free.

little to dark for my taste. to much negativity .

to funny so many think themselves so high above everyone else and forget right below their feet is the grave they aren't far from.

only have one drawback on this story the mc isn't op enough this far in the story he's still at the poor me stage .

yuris the baby dragon who died in her arms Nadine her mother.

great read don't let the first part sway you it truly isn't that kind of story it's showing his personality more than the act .

you and ur cliff hangers!!!

never mind chapter 33 answered the question.

10 million dollar question ??? how is now possible for either fighter to come out of this without having to flee the country ? both have unzipped their fly and let it all hang out for all to see in both positive and negative ways? both will have the powers to be after them and neither have enough power behind them to remain safe.

no difference to going and see deffleapard and a old guy with a brit flag shirt sporting a walker. or Vince neal the old and fat version . I understand the want to recapture youth geesh .

funny thing is the cleanest whitest teeth are in Africa and they only use a stick figure that out lol.

sheesh tecno dance while playing with guns shows a guy's crotch alot.

you handled it far better than I could great job.

not worth it for 2 chapters

it just acured to me, but isn't this novel now in a perfect spot to be a village builder?

then why call it the end?

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

forgiveness and pride go hand in hand and are both tough bulls to ride. billion dollar question in double jeopardy alex ? can u love someone enough to love them? Love is not ownership its shareing. .can u picture someone ever trying to own serana? she's every woman in the world meant to be respected and loved wanna own her? remember, what happened to her dad?

your commentaries at the end makes it better point is you don't have to care . you do, however, have to act like you do .most of her conversations will come from her female friends, you were never meant to understand anyway.