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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Back in Ancient Times

Maou09
Maou09Lv5Maou09

I don't care if the MC wants to practice cultivation to attain immortality, but please stop writing this fic like it's a xianxia. ESPECIALLY the character interactions. That's not what I came here to read.

GoldenZega606
GoldenZega606Lv1GoldenZega606

great chapter, I hope you continue to learn everything in the avatar style and its various elements, such as wanting to be a supreme master of sealing.

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DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

the fight scene was just trash, it had nothing to do with them being weak.

Buxwiel
BuxwielLv3Buxwiel

Thanks for chapter!

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

your a moron and someone who doesn't know the culture of either writing seals in kanji of other symbols if you choose to instead write it in English.

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

You just explained how Japanese language worked, they use kanji that either mean one think or another, like how Kami means God but also means Bow and four other meanings in their language.

Dipon_Ic
Dipon_IcLv1Dipon_Ic

Author you need a proof reader or grammarly

_Alenkar
_AlenkarLv3_Alenkar

way he is going, reminds me of Shibai's Shinjutsu

space_duck
space_duckLv1space_duck

You're just a failed writer. You want to write a Wuxia novel, but you don't know how, and then you thought of writing a Naruto fan fiction and adding whatever oriental fantasy you can think of. Or you are stealing this novel from one of the foolish Chinese authors

Jack_Frost_3962
Jack_Frost_3962Lv4Jack_Frost_3962

Good chapter

DaoistF0koDD
DaoistF0koDDLv2DaoistF0koDD

buen capitulo

Zeussh
ZeusshLv4Zeussh

Thanks for the chapter

Leylin_Farlier99
Leylin_Farlier99Lv14Leylin_Farlier99

thanks for the chapter man.