Comments of chapter undefined of A Hollow in DC and Beyond.

A Hollow in DC and Beyond.

Azazyel

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Master_CheifLv4Master_Cheif

this fanfic has sss teir potential with little to no grammatical errors I hope author san continues I enjoyed it aswell

1yr

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SexyYoungMasterLv13SexyYoungMaster

Dawg the chapter was full of grammatical errors, mainly run-ons. What do you mean ‘little to none’.

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cheeki_breekiLv13cheeki_breeki

would be really good if u posted pictures of what he looks like cus going on google and typing up these different hollows aint helping

1yr

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Kwetzal_LagLv4Kwetzal_Lag

Azazyel drops another morsel for us poor mortals to consume

1yr

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NotSoBigShlongLv13NotSoBigShlong

You should go over this with grammarly, the punctuation makes it hard to read

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LeficiosTVLv14LeficiosTV

Thanks for the chapter.

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LucikielLv4Lucikiel

Gracias por el capitulo

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RochirushLv10Rochirush

1yr

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Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

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EntityLXXLv12EntityLXX

Excited for this story!

1yr

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Ikito_ContalbaLv3Ikito_Contalba

Nice

1yr

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Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

Thank you for the chapter 🥰

1yr

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MimicReadsLv14MimicReads

Ty

1yr

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BattleKing10000Lv5BattleKing10000

First

1yr

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BattleKing10000Lv5BattleKing10000

This is good so far, keep up the good work

1yr

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CroleolyLv4Croleoly

Only one question, how is he advancing so fast?

10mth

Honoured_WriterLv4Honoured_Writer

This just may be a top tier fanfic

1yr

TheLittleGirlLv13TheLittleGirl

Reading - Interesting start!

1yr

Six_GunsLv4Six_Guns

Demons can also cross dimensions, but are banished by Lucifer

1yr

JollybeeLv1Jollybee

Never saw bleach but im investment either way

1yr

KhorsLv15Khors

👍

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