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SexyYoungMaster20dReplied to Daoist961469Ch 6 The Encounter I- SexyYoungMaster23dCommented
Stop changing from 3rd to 1st person ffs 🤦🏽♂️
With a body like this all it took was a simple carelessness or even a bit of confusion, after all from what he understood from the memories he had absorbed he had to be accurate in the world of DC comics. - SexyYoungMaster26dReplied to RuberDF
I’m crying 😭
As the gentle melody flowed from him, his effectiveness in eliminating the beasts that crossed his path noticeably increased. It was as if the music was acting as a stimulus, driving his performance and motivation, making him even more agile and focused on the task at hand. Each note that emerged seemed to create an echo of power that resonated, enhancing his determination in the fight against the beasts. - SexyYoungMaster30dReplied to Omni404_Sans
That would mean altering the whole story. Butterfly affect
"Yes, your prices are quite fair, so I decided to exchange more. I just don't know if you can handle it." Josh nodded. - SexyYoungMaster1mthCommented
A soldier that doesn’t kill. makes sense
Morrow's assistant, Brom Stikk, was human. As easy as it would be to simply turn him into paste, he didn't kill. Well he didn't kill real people, robots and androids don't count. - SexyYoungMaster1mthCommentedCh 3 Solo Players Played Duo Too???
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Makes density shifting his weak trait but still names him ghost, the creature known for phasing through walls.
Telekinesis was noted to be his strongest point and that was proven by the ease at which he dealt with the genomorphs. - SexyYoungMaster1mthCommented
So why would he not stay home? His first thought is to go to school when he has no idea what is going on? For what? To face slap people and get into misunderstandings? I can see where this story is going, mc most likely no intelligence at all this story just pure wish fullfillment.
"No, go to work. They need you there more than me. I'll go to school." Peter says reassuringly. "I just need a good shower and I'll be fine. I think I had food poisoning last night, but it's gone now." - SexyYoungMaster2mthCommentedCh 2 War
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So is this mc going after toph or no, and think carefully, being 16 is completely taking advantage. Even if you wait till 18, that’s literally grooming. And none of that “it’s different world” bs. That’a just disgusting
"For my last wish, I want to be born in Ba Sing Se, to a high-class noble family, 4 years before the Gaang." Kypher attempted again still having some slight hope in having a good starting point and family and not angering the figure he was bartering with. - SexyYoungMaster2mthReplied to Karito_
So you set the main character as 16, when you already mentioned Toph as your favorite love interest.. I have no interest reading in a pedos work if this is what it is
"For my last wish, I want to be born in Ba Sing Se, to a high-class noble family, 4 years before the Gaang." Kypher attempted again still having some slight hope in having a good starting point and family and not angering the figure he was bartering with. - SexyYoungMaster2mthReplied to RaedaX_1Ch 21 20. Samir
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“I’m going to have a little fun” proceeds to chuck the most common sense out the window almost ruining the whole story
Clay decided to have a little fun and smirked before slowly nodding in a sincere voice. "Are you a cat?" he asked. There was a moment of silence before he continued, "No, no, you're not a cat. Ah, I see. You must be the transfiguration teacher of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and an animagus to boot," he nodded as if he had just uncovered the answers to the world's secrets. "Are you here to give me my Hogwarts letter? I'm afraid I won't be able to read it as I'm currently blind." - SexyYoungMaster2mthCommentedClay kept staring, but he was not looking at her chest like Mary thought, he was looking at a firey orb at the centre of her being, it was pure white not a single colour. Then clay looked down and saw a rainbow-coloured fire orb at the centre of his chest, but at the very centre was pure black.
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And you made him out to be a member of a surviving race with only 10 or so members. Where is his self preservation? No where. If all members had his perseveration abilities in keeping their secrets hidden from the public, they should’ve just died off tbh.
"I should have dragged them off the Island the second I was found out," Aaron said. - SexyYoungMaster2mthCommented
I take back what I said author, seems like you know that it has been frustrating for us readers loss after loss ig
It'd been loss after loss since that day Igi died, and even when he won, he still lost.
