Comments of chapter undefined of Athos Apsifoun : The Son Of Herakles

I like the story but for future reference you’re giving him too much too early. like the heracles and him training the kid makes sense. the memories also work. anything past that inital start has to feel earned. Like his fight with the manticore and getting the favors. that whole scenario was abrupt but it made sense. Having this whole anime protag power up scene is not at the level of the previous writing. I especially find the fact iritating because this is a fanfic and you can choose to expand on heracles power by saying something like he has infinite strength but it can only be used when you have the will to do so. You could have made a way for the initial power or backstory to scale rather than do all of this. Anyways sorry for the rant but I just wanted to give advice for the future since your story was so good so far.