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"Mimic seems to be working with the Black Ops equivalent of the Marines while Justice and Goddess of Ice are being trained by the Vice Admirals that have the same Devil Fruit power they do, giving them a serious boost in the skill department. White Knight hasn't revealed his skills to the Marines yet, so he is training in secret. We don't know how strong he is."- IZenusI1yrReplied to Jeremy_Poon
Seeing red is correct. It’s a saying based on bulls rushing into red capes.
The lion felt reasonably insulted. The child he had cornered was treating this like a game. Seeing red, the lion form chimera ant launched himself into the storm of logs and attacked Rayleigh. The logs naturally moved out of his way to give him an opening and since the other paths were blocked, Rayleigh was unable to dodge. Instead, he used Force Valor to shift the position of his body like a cat to turn and face the lion and strike with his Lightsaber. The direction the lion approached from would now lead to him getting decapitated, so one of the logs naturally moved to block the Nensaber and another moved to push the lion out of harm's way and back out of the encirclement. - IZenusI1yrReplied to Alpha_Idiot
No he means ignoble as in not noble
At his age my father would only let me build little things with a material as ignoble and humiliating as wood because I wasn't ready to use steel... - IZenusI1yrReplied to IZenusIWait a minute… did he say my last name is Freed?...Freed? Frederick Freed?
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Like fairytail
Wait a minute… did he say my last name is Freed?...Freed? Frederick Freed? - IZenusI1yrPosted
A great book with one of the best potential relationships I’ve seen. But goddamn does the author refuse to even write them as considering being together. 140ch in and theres not even an inkling of them getting together. It feels like being lead on. a great book so far but god i wish they just got together already.
- IZenusI1yrCommentedCh 30 Chapter 30 Fighting Hisoka
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To clarify the fruit is in the weapon so without some form of sentience or sapience they would not be able to active their abilities.
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I think the reason only zoans worked was because without it they wouldn’t have sapience. however if the crystal is alive and he can communicate with it through the force he could probably use a different fruit type. My suggestion would be Gura/Quake because he can combine the shake with shatterpoint to shatter space. It would also allow him to use the force to generate vibrations as they can go through any medium. This gives him range, destructive power and cool factor. It also allows you to not have to kill anyone off as whitebeard is already going to die.
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I like the story but for future reference you’re giving him too much too early. like the heracles and him training the kid makes sense. the memories also work. anything past that inital start has to feel earned. Like his fight with the manticore and getting the favors. that whole scenario was abrupt but it made sense. Having this whole anime protag power up scene is not at the level of the previous writing. I especially find the fact iritating because this is a fanfic and you can choose to expand on heracles power by saying something like he has infinite strength but it can only be used when you have the will to do so. You could have made a way for the initial power or backstory to scale rather than do all of this. Anyways sorry for the rant but I just wanted to give advice for the future since your story was so good so far.
Ch 26 SHUTEN-DOJI - IZenusI1yrReplied to ultrahi"I really am a lonely god," he mutters sadly. "But it's only for a few more years...I'll bring us back together, I'll fix this, then we never have to set foot in Japan again..."
- IZenusI1yrReplied to Zero_Speed
He’d have to lose himself in anger to regen like that
The Extremis project was more than a decade away, and apart from the semi-inviolability, it had no benefit to me. The only highlight of it was the ability regrow limbs which was something I would have loved to get but unfortunately it would be years before the research was completed. - IZenusI1yrReplied to Draul_TheOminous
Rather than a weapon, he should get gauntlets. Solves the flesh issue as well.
'I really need to get a weapon. Punching and tearing through flesh with bare hands is not fun.' - IZenusI1yrReplied to Crazy_Penguin
Not ramen itself but its a part of ramen.
Some might ask why I changed my name. I changed it because I didn't want to be connected to Naruto in other worlds, and also, I don't want to be called by a name which is a type of ramen. Sure, Naruto can also mean Maelstrom, but I wanted to take a name which symbolised me and my roots. - IZenusI1yrCommented
Maybe attractive here instead of magnetic?
'It's like an electrical charge running through my whole body, so strange but it feels good, so magnetic ?' thought Tom confused with what he was feeling. - IZenusI1yrReplied to Aronas
I read it like “sue-kai-na”
[Sukaina's POV] - IZenusI1yrCommented
Tsunade already appeared
(A/N: Is it finally time for best girl to appear...?) - IZenusI1yrCommentedCh 31 Arriving at Marineford and Punishment