Comments of chapter undefined of Queen Of Slaves

It's painful to lose someone you love so much especially your mum.

Sadish, thanks for the chapter 😢

This book is interesting [img=recommend]

I kinda started to like Ma Jun... He is very cool for me... But feeling bad that he won't be there for So hyun anymore😢😢😢

It beaks my heart, he just can't talk and silence is killing him inside 😔

🥲😭😭😭

wow! intriguing!

i think the chapters are too long

This is a nice story as for two chapters I've read until now...that's what I can say...although I do not agree that the soul dies with the body...and the story O would say seems to be epic...no comedy and all that...I don't actually prefer these at all I guess but although it seems nice...like a Chinese samurai animation

The transition between story lines weren't as smooth for me and you should focus more on your first and second person point of view.

Thanks for the chapter

I think you have a great story line but I think the execution needs a bit more work in terms of tenses and first-person, second-person and third-person narrative. [img=fp]

beautiful chapter and beautiful description.......its made me curious to know more about his life

Quite a smooth transition between the two points of view in the past to the present now.

I wonder why the father can move on so quickly after his wife passed away. no fair!