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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

yourgramps
yourgrampsLv14yourgramps

tekkai forces you to stand still if I remember correctly fun story otherwise

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Charmys_Chef
Charmys_ChefLv1Charmys_Chef

Interesting stuff with Rokushiki, I think it's a great move trying to learn those. Also, I'm curious author, the events of Ohara occur about 2 years after the execution of Roger, and it's been a year since that's happened if I remember correctly on your FF. Any chance you try to go there prior to the Buster Call? I don't think I've read any FF's where the MC goes to Ohara prior to the Buster Call.

Zeno
ZenoLv5Zeno

good chapter, 1.-the destruction of ohara is a bit incoherent in my opinion, they are studying the ponegly, although this was a secret, it is super convenient that they did not have the protection of some great chief, like bigmon, who wanted to be the queen pirate, and he needs to know how to read the ponegly, I think this could force them to decipher the ancient language, besides, the tree of knowledge does not attract his attention?, besides, if he were not bigmon, it seems very rare to me that shiki (long before the execution of roger), he has not kidnapped the island of ohara with his ability, perhaps the tree of knowledge does not attract anyone?, I can explain the above much better, but it would be many words, but with what I wrote, you can understand the point that I want to reach or imply. 2.- with the technology of one piece shown, more vegapunk, I would not be surprised if this created a bioandroid or being with very rotten capabilities, in homage or reference to dragon ball, since there are oda many times left in claro in interviews what a fan he is of dragon ball.

Lucifer20
Lucifer20Lv4Lucifer20

You can’t move with tekken

Magically
MagicallyLv2Magically

King of the savannah you mean.

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Angledark
AngledarkLv5Angledark

Good Chapter

Venerable_One
Venerable_OneLv4Venerable_One

Why the screaming?

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CustomFireblast
CustomFireblastLv14CustomFireblast

Should have him learn Mishima Karate.

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

jnnaoiffos
jnnaoiffosLv1jnnaoiffos

Huf... Huf...

as123
as123Lv3as123

i like this fanfic for how the mc didn't become strong enough to fight a vice admiral in a few months (this is quite common lately)

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Dragon_forever
Dragon_foreverLv2Dragon_forever

Thanks