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he has the devilfruit integration into weapon why not zoom zoom into a telescope or binoculars woulda been a fun gadget or put it on the marksmans scope actually had some fun potential to show you didn't include rewards for the sake of being rewards and mc thinks about how to utilise the things he gets...besides this I am really enjoying the story great work man
2/10 +33% lower accuracy for the smoke but ok i was just saying it was kinda disappointing to see him lose a fight he could have won for sure but I am still reading this fanfic as i think it has become a lot better since that chapter where he lost
you can kill someone close it would be good cause now they feel like luffy pre time skip pretty much and I think a reasonable strenght would be between vice admiral and admiral slightly bellow the admiral level so he has to take some losses but survives and develops great story anyway just do you!
it does tho???