Comments of chapter undefined of Utilizing a mafia boss

Well I'm kind of new to this world so let's see how it all goes. I like the narrative helps me visualizes what I'm reading. I want to know more about Mr bossy and the traitor kind of deserved it.

Its beginning is very glamorous😍. I will read it further.

Interesting start

Wow, this chapter is so intense. Very creative !

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Such a good start!! Starting scene was intense that grabbed my attention

whoa! Sebastian's heart sure is frozen

A mafia with emotions let me where takes me

I love it 😊

A good start

nice chapter...

What a majestic way to begin your story✨

it's quite interesting

An intriguing first chapter... makes me wonder what else this mafia boss can do 😅[img=update]

Very attention grabbing...[img=update]

Quite a first chapter, i feel really sad there isn't anything more. But you did a great job.

will be interesting to see where this goes

Nice chapter, i hope to see future updates

This is terrific! for an opening chapter, but I also wish this was written from a third-person pov... Would have hit harder with the violence in that way. And absolutely loved the level of the torture scenes... It was entertaining.