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Comments of chapter undefined of DC: Atlantean Alchemist

E_Mendez
E_MendezLv4E_Mendez

What’s the point in making the MC wait two years to get his powers if your just going to give it to him a couple paragraphs later…?

Z1op
Z1opLv11Z1op

Too many wishes killed the novel before it could even get started.

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evillaughter
evillaughterLv4evillaughter

author you need to rewrite this fic

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

Is this Chinese Translation Fic? It sure feels like It too me.

NuggerNaut
NuggerNautLv5NuggerNaut

Oof, this interaction with his 'higher power' is certainly a novel choice. The powers are extensive and OP, but I guess is balanced with the unwilling alterations to MCs personality and memories? It might just be me, but having the personality/character traits or our MC be altered dramatically in the beginning of a novel is such a kill-joy.(always seems like a excuse for false "character growth" or drama/tension later on)

JerryI
JerryILv2JerryI

Why is the first race a Kryptonian? And if you can't make only these two, then just make a perpetua race.

_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1_DEKIM_

The author's decisions are bad. But the author has talent so the work is good but not because of the author's decisions. Just my opinion

Wahab_adebanjo
Wahab_adebanjoLv4Wahab_adebanjo

this first chapter was just....... hhm

Osiv
OsivLv5Osiv

OverlordBGs
OverlordBGsLv14OverlordBGs

Nice chapter

dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

would just change this race, like a son of poseydon with an Atlantean crossbreed with an angel or a high elf, he would have enormous advantages without changing personality or anything like that, in addition to being something totally plausible, due to all the races existing in DC, there would be a greater potential.

Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799
Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799Lv1Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799

Atlantians and fishmen are borh superhumanly strong and he has regeneration he could have trained earlier

Taoist_Ouroboros
Taoist_OuroborosLv11Taoist_Ouroboros

so its only his memories of dc that are gone?