Comments of chapter undefined of I'm Finn Mertens and I've Become a Player!

love it see this is way better, of course just a resume but its more focused on mc's relationship with bonnie and jake while he get prepared for canon, now we only need to see the canon start and see the diference between Op finn and old childish finn, not only in interactions but the reaction of canon characters. keep the good work, also later he should give marceline a item that let her be in the sun light without burning herself, i think that after mc told her the sotry of their ''future relationhip'' things might start to be ackward for them, so using that item and also ''charles experience'' to break the ice and get along with her might help, not to mention it will help mc a lot in this harem plan

Thanks for the chapter. Just a consideration of mine, don't rush the romance/harem/+18 or whatever it is going to be, build the world better first before going to romance. Many authors end up doing this and forget about history, and the fan-fic ends up becoming an ordinary pornographic book.

Honestly so far it’s better then the previous one

I like the time skip

😊👏👍

Thanks

Thanks for chapter

Bom d+, continue assim Pf, queria ver a interação entre fin, bonnie e marceline

Buen capitulo amigo

So, are you giving jobs levels but not showing the levels? if so that's a good idea, make it like 'that death mage that doesn't want a 4th time' give it a read if you haven't yet. In that world you go to guilds to touch a 'job crystal' to change jobs so lets say you start as a villager you can level that to 100 to get a better version or change jobs to 'warrior' or 'mage' to max them out and branch out. but the point is that you get permanent stat boosts(that tailor to the job) with the new jobs you pick and keep the skills. there is always a job for you to pick from always, if there isn't then one is made to sound like it's a thing. you could make it so every 5-10 job levels he can pick a new job to get more boosts.

Thanks for the chapter!! I can't wait for the next one!!

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks for chapter

where the pyromancer job? and its skills