Comments of chapter undefined of The Dragonwolf

The Dragonwolf

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Osborn123Lv1Osborn123

This story was going so well... and in just 2 chapters the author had to screw it all... The mc losing one of the dragons is simply a joke. Wasn't all the 3 dragons already linked with him? And was't such a bond for life? And yet the author still chose to twist the plot unrealisticaly to force the mc to wed a child... And the choice for queen is simply the worst... The mc has more than 300 years of mental age and the mentality of modern society, and yet now he acceps a child as a wive? Come on! Is he a pedophile now or what? And the problems are not just her age, but the fact that she is no beauty and has nothing to her name aside from problems. Well, that's not true, she has the dragon that she just STOLE from the mc... No matter how one looks at it, the author completely forced this ridiculous result without even bothering to pretend... Also, the mc is getting too laid back and barely does anything more in the story. This is the other reason the author is screwing it. Apparently, since the author fears letting the mc grow too fast too soon, he decided to avoid as much as possible to write about him... Sigh... What a let down...

5mth

George_VasiliuLv3George_Vasiliu

the amount of mental gymnastics you've done to justify this is too much sry... why would you even go there? a minor plain girl with half the complexes known to man in a fanfiction? srsly?

1yr

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BrezerLv14Brezer

I like the idea, I was leaning toward her from the start. Stan raised her to be a lord in a way and with what she has endured and still was a good person. she will be able to run winterfell like it needs to be.

1yr

TorhelmLv4Torhelm

Out of all the babes in Game of Thrones, you pick Shireen Baratheon 😱. Disappointed to say the least.

1yr

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NilistLv15Nilist

I’m actually okay with this choice. As long as she knows about Sansa we’re good. No use having to hide that from the main wife. That can just lead to huge issues down the road.

1yr

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AlnaturaLv11Alnatura

Well you said it in the "Afterword" (Nachwort) : I must say I don't like the shireen stuff... She is just no marriage option for me. She is to weak, to childish, to sweet, to mentally broken by her parents to ever be a queen for me. And I don't like that one of Jon's dragon riders is basically useless, the dragon ist good but shireen is useless on one unless Jon wakes her magic or something..... Anyhow, good story so far, but some minor things annoy me as a grrm book reader. And please keep the good for nothing harem you are about to create to a minimum, it sucks. :) Greetings and have a great weekend.

1yr

ShinzoLv15Shinzo

Good stuff bud! This is Your story and I for one am glad you see it as such.

1yr

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laboonlaboonLv6laboonlaboon

thanks for the chapter [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend] there s still a second dragon ... who will be the second wife..? rhanys Targaryen ( not sure about the name, I mean the firstborne of ELA ) , that would bring dorne, which is always interesting

1yr

watzJLv4watzJ

Great chapter!~ I really like the pace of the story and Shiren as a wife

1yr

Gregory_SullivanLv15Gregory_Sullivan

love your story so far it keeps me coming back for more. any chance of multiple wives? maybe 1 or 2 more to round it out nicely?

1yr

RoseAmberLv14RoseAmber

Thanks for the update 🌌⚔️

1yr

jackmillington101Lv14jackmillington101

ugh

3mth

TheLittleGirlLv13TheLittleGirl

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

7mth

Mysteries_Lv11Mysteries_

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