Comments of chapter undefined of DxD: The forgotten mob character, Motohama

me after reading that last part:

Explanation will be made, but the signs in the story were delivered very subtle. The mysterious meeting between the mc and 'Hikimage' was very convenient. He was put to face an army of harpies and conquered them too. All of this was premeditated. Even 'Hikimage' giving Rias the magic books was convenient. I had already left parallels in the story and showing that that giant figure and our mc are similar. Including the fact that he is also a Hikikomori. Hikimage= HIKIkomori +MAGE Our mc is the real Hikimage. Angelie is just the one who was doing our mc's orders a long time in the past.

Me after reading this chapter:

I dont get the whole last part. Also why is Cassiel referred to as She near the end?

me after reading this chapter:

I feel like you're trying too hard to be inception, dxd honestly has more than enough key plot points without adding adozen more before the first arc even finishes it makes the story feel overbloated, i like the general idea but would suggest writing out a timeline and writing around it so as to avoid that, either way all the best. [img=recommend]

So if I am understanding it right the MC has actually been isekaied into dxd long time ago and for some reason decided to be reborn as Motohama?

very nice. Thanks for the chapter.

this is either going to be really interesting or ruin the story. find out next time on drago... cough dxd

Wait so DXD da Vinci with the Power of Fate Da Vinci which is basically Always improving all Things you learn that would be OP but i am so Hype for next chapter now i am gonna Cliff Dive in my Wingsuit See you later.

Not really a fan tbh. If you suddenly give the mc memories of another lifetime in the past, you're essentially deleting the mc (who we got attached to) and replacing him with someone else. Sure, they might have the same baseline personality, but a person is the sum of their experiences. This is equivalent to pulling a Motohama from the future or an alternate universe and having them replace our mc, in terms of them being the same person. In fact, it's eerily similar to what happened to the original Motohama at the start of this story, with someone absorbing his memories and taking over his body. Not only that, it also pulls the rug out of our expected power progression (one of the main pulls of this story imo) by having a way more experienced character who is already way more knowledgeable about magic take over the mc. I'm gonna put my faith in you and keep reading since the rest of this story has been really good so far, but I honestly don't have high hopes, unfortunately. A plot twist isn't always a good thing, especially when the story before the plot twist could already stand on its own two legs.

So what happens to Motohama. The Mc we wanted but apparently not the Mc we deserved. All jokes aside, what about all the character development as Motohama. Really like that dude you know. Well i hope that he continues with his human form.

Wut?

Suddeness, the sheer suddeness of the move...[img=update][img=update][img=update]

what just happened ?

ok, i confess i didn't expect that

Bonus chapter please

Ohh I see...here i thought hikimage is his future self

Memories make the man. The writer just killed the m.c for all intents and purposes, the person we have known this entire story is dead. I have never dropped a book this fast.