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Comments of chapter undefined of Jack Hanma: True might [reworked]

Tim_Persons
Tim_PersonsLv14Tim_Persons

I'm not a fan of rewrites but with this chapter you have convinced me.

The_Rune_Raven
The_Rune_RavenLv4The_Rune_Raven

interesting approach to introducing Jack, i liked the original story so this new one will be heavily judged, keep up the good work thou can't wait for more

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LongShlong
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SinX_Five
SinX_FiveLv4SinX_Five

It’s good thanks for the chapter can’t for more

AtreusGodOfWar
AtreusGodOfWarLv2AtreusGodOfWar

I find this beginning better than the old chapter better developed and spelled globally this version is of better quality. Thank you for this chapter looking forward to the sequel!

AbsoluteLoliLover
AbsoluteLoliLoverLv2AbsoluteLoliLover

John Wick and terminator with steroids

Devilboi1
Devilboi1Lv13Devilboi1

I’m gonna be honest I don’t understand why you dropped it in the first place could’ve asked someone else to continue it, and also I don’t get why your gonna go over every chapter you’ve already wrote that even though we’re rough in the beginning overtime got extremely good, just to completely change the story all together I mean honestly it’s stupid no offense author but you should have just dropped cause it was already good as was and now your just trying completely change the whole story from system to natural. My bad if your offended by this but it was honestly fine the way it was, and if your not gonna continue it why even revise it, like it makes no sense for you to go thru each chapter you already finished just to drop it again when all your chapters run out it’s stupid extremely so, your basically doing a whole bunch of work for absolutely nothing, and you can’t tell me otherwise as I have also written my own books but under an alt account, as a fellow author I loved it the way it was as you slowly but gradually fixed mistakes you were making in the beginning, started character building as well as world building it was going extremely well and I would have gladly continued it for you. Anyways thanks for reading if you did and hope you make some more good books in the future, in the end I could be considered a hater but know I loved your book all the same and I wish all the success, as a fellow author god speed my friend

AbsoluteLoliLover
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Dragon_forever
Dragon_foreverLv2Dragon_forever

Thx

Hassan_Hadi
Hassan_HadiLv5Hassan_Hadi

Allot better than the first time thats for sure

thesacredmenace
thesacredmenaceLv4thesacredmenace

thanks for the chapter

Jack_Gibson_4978
Jack_Gibson_4978Lv1Jack_Gibson_4978

Much better than before, keep it up and sorry for all my corrections

Anthony_Higgin
Anthony_HigginLv4Anthony_Higgin

Thanks for the chapter and this reworked version seems promising.

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv5Demiurge_Ohara

i already love the premise, but why stop at chapter 1?

Alli_Balli
Alli_BalliLv11Alli_Balli

When do you plan on uploading new chapters?

Ikizumari
IkizumariLv13Ikizumari

Keep going, it’s one of the only good baki fanfics in my opinion.

Sangye_Dhondup_9363
Sangye_Dhondup_9363Lv4Sangye_Dhondup_9363

👍😁

ImperialCoffee
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SonoBello
SonoBelloLv4SonoBello

The time to stockpile a new book has come. I'll see you again in three months

House_of_Mechania
House_of_MechaniaLv4House_of_Mechania

I dropped my previous discord, and made a new one. can you please send the invite link to the server?