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Ikizumari2mthReplied to Angel_Canet_9106Yes, 15 metres is 45 feet
The Slayer can Grapple and throw creatures 15m or smaller.- Ikizumari2mthPosted
Shameless author review? Naw. From the viewpoint of a reader, not enough updates, characters don’t interact smooth enough just yet, grammar could be better in a few spots but not many, use too many commas, spelling mistakes are rare but occasionally spot a few, story is progressing slowly, but that can be attributed to the updates as well.
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As for airbending*
Shrugging off the thanks from Berkeley, Jake didn't think that he did anything great, he simply did what was right. Saving someone's life is an amazing thing to do, but Jake didn't think that it deserved that much gratitude. - Ikizumari2mthReplied to Haise_Sasaki1
But what constitutes water? Is it simply H2O? Or is it any liquids? With earthbending it’s the earth, so like minerals and stuff, impurities in the metals allow metal bending. Lava bending is just heating up the molecules and stuff. Fire bending is… basically useless in my opinion. As for sore bending if they are just bending air, then that means they can bend anything in the air. So hydrogen, oxygen, nitrogen, and any other trace amounts of gases. So technically airbenders should be called gas benders. Waterbenders can bend the water out of the air and airbenders should be able to separate the water into separate elements
Shrugging off the thanks from Berkeley, Jake didn't think that he did anything great, he simply did what was right. Saving someone's life is an amazing thing to do, but Jake didn't think that it deserved that much gratitude. - Ikizumari2mthReplied to Haise_Sasaki1
Any opinions on if he should only have one type of bending or multiple? I know that canonically he shouldn’t have more then one type of bending, but meh. If he is to only have one type of bending then it would be water bending. He could practice bending and get so powerful with it that he could forcefully bend Planet 4546B through space, however that would be impossible due to many different reasons, starting with the fact that there would be no sun or moon(s) around the planet
Shrugging off the thanks from Berkeley, Jake didn't think that he did anything great, he simply did what was right. Saving someone's life is an amazing thing to do, but Jake didn't think that it deserved that much gratitude. - Ikizumari2mthReplied to
You do realize that he is 16, right? This also goes into the comment you made about a hero complex. He is a teenager, of course he has a hero complex. Plus he doesn’t think it’s a big deal to save someone because he still doesn’t know how valuable life is. Also I will try to make the dialogue less robotic and I am idea on how to do so. Thanks for the input!
Shrugging off the thanks from Berkeley, Jake didn't think that he did anything great, he simply did what was right. Saving someone's life is an amazing thing to do, but Jake didn't think that it deserved that much gratitude. - Ikizumari3mthReplied to Loki1190
I mean, with earth bending could you theoretically bend the iron out of someones blood? Plus just metal bending and lava bending alone are good. He will definitely have water bending since if he is a strong enough bender, what would happen if he stayed on a planet that was almost exclusively water. like 97% water
Ch 12 Chapter 11: The Nightmare - Ikizumari3mthReplied to Loki1190Ch 12 Chapter 11: The Nightmare
- Ikizumari5mthReplied to Vaulted_Hood32
Yeah but like, they want to know how much
"It's definitely special effects. If it's not, I'll eat five catties of shit while doing a handstand!" - Ikizumari5mthCommented
I thought this was the MC talking, but no
His name is Akihiko Kayaba. And he is about to steal ten thousand souls. He is about to turn them into heroes. - Ikizumari5mthReplied to gameking_fedde
One punch man!
George West - Grandfather - Go be a spy, son. - Ikizumari7mthReplied to YourGrandfather
Probably the gold
The bartender, after verifying the Galleon's authenticity, followed Sherlock's order and served them two bottles of whiskey. "Just ask if you want any more, sir," he offered. - Ikizumari7mthReplied to KenTheSlayer
LoTM?
But neither Sherlock nor Harry paid much attention; well, girls are like that, there are a few days every month when they're not as cheerful, if she is always cheerful and hearty, then that would be the strange thing. (E/N.: bruh) - Ikizumari7mthCommented
It put a smile on my face reading this. I imagined three dumbledores doing ninja moves around her and trying to defeat her.
Looking up at the impressively tall figure of the female headmaster, Harry couldn't help but be taken aback by her sheer physical magnitude. He had the distinct feeling that, if Madame Maxime and Professor Dumbledore were to engage in a physical altercation, with the strict restriction of no magical involvement, Madame Maxime could easily see off even three Dumbledores. - Ikizumari8mthReplied to BoredCrow
While eating a snail
I've seen other people with 'inhuman' features. One of the nurses has three eyes. One of the parents that came here to pick up their child has a tail. - Ikizumari8mthReplied to Sir_Squirrel
What is a lemon scene?
[If you're not into furry, now is the best time to leave and no it's not a lemon scene.] - Ikizumari8mthReplied to nilbog_the_greedy
Make sure to wipe the screen
Speaking of the weird guy, Tigress was having a hard time sleeping last night due to the boy's face always appearing in her mind. Tigress doesn't know what was happening to her but she just registered it as a nightmare or something similar to it. - Ikizumari8mthReplied to maskhara
AHEM* I think you meant Multiverse?
Although it may look like it is useless but it is actually not as he would be needing this ability to not only understand the language of the universe that he might go to but there might be some instance where he would get a very high privilege or access to some ancient artifact that would require him to read a language never seen before in the universe.