Honestly in my opinion this story is shit, I mean you give him a dungeon in the beginning, make him train there, give him ownership, literally kills the boss in the most bitchass way possible, and then upgrade his dungeon, make him wanna stay in his dungeon, and instead of building on that; such as making his dungeon expandable, or him creating a kingdom in there, or even making it like one of those bad Korean mangas with the dungeon breaks and shit, like there was so much you could’ve done with the idea but you completely scrapped it, your ass.

Naw since he is stealing cat woman’ dads

Honeslty lost me when the author decided it was a good idea to make 2 souls inhabit 1 body, like that’s gotta be the most stupid decision ever, just make illusion magic a thing like seriously stupid shit and I hate gender bender cause til this day I have not read a good gender bender, literally no-where so I don’t know why u tried, well that’s my take if u like shitty fan-fic with trash writing this is it

I’m sorry author but unlimited physical potential would come with the ability to gain resistances whether it’s heat, weight, cold, and even diseases would be counteracted by his body’s potential to gain resistance. I’m gonna be honest man this makes absolutely no sense and I am gonna be dropping it because if you don’t even know what UNLIMITED means in a power than I’m scared for the future of this fic, thanks for writing tho and I hope you get better at It cause unfortunately your pretty bad rn

I’ve broken a lot of bones and idk if my body just got used to it but even my doctor were kinda weirded by it, for example I was younger when this happened but I broke my elbow basically my upper arm and forearm had been completely separated from the joint and doctors said I wouldn’t have full range of motion and they even had to use pins to pin both ends of my bone together a month goes by I have full range of motion and it’s completely healed pretty weird but I ain’t complaining😂🤷🏼‍♂️

More like 4 and a half😂

I’m gonna be honest I don’t understand why you dropped it in the first place could’ve asked someone else to continue it, and also I don’t get why your gonna go over every chapter you’ve already wrote that even though we’re rough in the beginning overtime got extremely good, just to completely change the story all together I mean honestly it’s stupid no offense author but you should have just dropped cause it was already good as was and now your just trying completely change the whole story from system to natural. My bad if your offended by this but it was honestly fine the way it was, and if your not gonna continue it why even revise it, like it makes no sense for you to go thru each chapter you already finished just to drop it again when all your chapters run out it’s stupid extremely so, your basically doing a whole bunch of work for absolutely nothing, and you can’t tell me otherwise as I have also written my own books but under an alt account, as a fellow author I loved it the way it was as you slowly but gradually fixed mistakes you were making in the beginning, started character building as well as world building it was going extremely well and I would have gladly continued it for you. Anyways thanks for reading if you did and hope you make some more good books in the future, in the end I could be considered a hater but know I loved your book all the same and I wish all the success, as a fellow author god speed my friend

I’m just spit balling here but wouldn’t a child be the best assassin as you would never see it coming and they could disappear in seconds no🤔

Not true you could throw a completely metal pole into a reactor and it will melt before it lands

Yea don’t worry about it man I’m only 5’4 and we all know why u consider that average, cause we’re tiny ppl😏😩😂

Bull****

Tell me how I read it as”I have all the kinks.”

Rewind

So just theoretically since the MC is shielding her brain void t he also do so from the thought of other as well or would that take up another spot in his mind if I focus on

Actually not true I’m psychotic, and the stereotype that we don’t feel is completely wrong we just associate different emotions with different things,for example John Wayne gacy in his interview said he finds pleasure in killing, pleasure is an emotion as well as physical stimuli. Someone who could kill without feeling would be more along the lines of a sociopath as they are less in tune with their own motions and are regularly more manipulative and conniving

So quick question cap before he got the serum was all scrawny and stuff, and in the movies they say that he’s to weak and frail to join the army, is it possible his metabolism was actually just to fast for his body or is it just sheer will like when he was getting beat up in the start of the first movie

This man right here is holder of wisdom only known to few you do well to read and adhere this knowledge for it as he said only for men of culture

I think he means since he can create an infinite space shouldn’t he also be able to conserve all his energy in that infinite space🤷🏼‍♂️

More like starclapper mission