very enjoyable story actually. a little ridiculous at times but hey i laughed at the apple in the hole thing hhhhh. if there is a continuation i would love to resume reading it. good luck ''''''''
Keep with this one. It’s amazing. And you can’t just drop it after a chapter like that! Come on lol we’re all tired of good GOT stories getting dropped or put on hiatus.
I'm really enjoying this book and glad you started writing this story. All writers are their harshest critics but I think you're improving and do a good job of conveying feelings through a page. I'll patiently wait for the next volume.