He gets hurt then he’s fine? He has to build ships in bravos? Then he builds small ships with rows for ocean travel? Why have a guy named sealord if he has no ships to take. Nothing makes sense in this I have more complaints about made up facts that are not true but it’s to many to list now

What do we type in to find you on fan fictions.net. I’ve tried the books titles and your user name can you drop a link or code to copy paste?

Short chapters but overall one of the best books I have read on here in a while

Best book on this site by far. If you read you’l see why

Just don’t give up so far its awesome!!!

The book is good and has a lot of pot ential as well. Hopefully it isn dropped at some point like most. So far worth the read.

Great book so far keep it up pLease

Awesome job dont give Up on this

Dont stop wri ting

Agreed this was a fantastic read Thank you

Keep writing please