Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Monarch System

just saying author...this forced comedy is childish, also the 'head' of the biggest merchant family himself came to open the door and followed two 'servants' in a alley is totally stupid...Now i dont know if the kingdom building will even be worth it in the future, you should take a serious approach instead of making the moments comedic if you are not good at it.

Thank you for the chapter

I understand that the beginning is a little shaky with the head of the biggest merchant family open the door and followed 2 strangers to a dark alley and all that, but this book is really good at least to my eyes, It got a little of (abe the wizard) in it, I love read more.[img=update]

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

thanks

Can't wait for more

Nice chapter

Really? Within the first five chapters my brain said “welp, this is how im spending my day instead of playing ARK” congrats on getting my first comment ever in over two years of being on this app

Wait so this normal guy from earth just killed 20+ people without batting an eye? This doesn't seem very realistic

This story could be good. The punctuation keeps breaking the story for me.

disagree with you. the biggest merchant in the city doesn't necessarily mean he has servants. he was expecting goods from a order to arrive as stated he was investing in mercenaries to over throw the king and take the castle hence becoming the ruler.

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Thanks for the chap

I don’t like Julia at all

thanks for the chapter