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Azure_warrior

Azure_warrior

Lv13

I am continuously improving in writing. I am also a reader of various fan fiction and [system] genre novels.

2020-06-19 JoinedUnited Arab Emirates
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior1mth
    Commented

    Bro this novel is good but please keep your rants at the end of the chapter. I don't usually comment but this is getting really bothering. After reading your rants, I lose interest in reading the chapter. I think many other readers feel the same.

    Ch 33 33. Undercurrents of Fate
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    Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior2mth
    Replied to Wnur

    I have read it to 151 chapters. Of course, I know what I am writing in this review. If you don't believe just read the first 20 chapters. With each chapters, things will become more and more interesting.

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    Before I Died I Forcibly Kissed The Heroine (CP)
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior2mth
    Posted

    This novel is really well written. The plot and the story line is quite interesting. The story gets more and more interesting with each passing chapter. And I really like the spacing of this novel as well.

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    Before I Died I Forcibly Kissed The Heroine (CP)
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior2mth
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter.

    Ch 38 Chapter 38:- Special Chapter [VI]
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    Naruto : Back to the Past
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior2mth
    Replied to RikuKage

    I see. Then you can do it at your own pace. Compared to the first few chapters, I really feel that the quality of this novel has increased. Your writing has gotten better.

    Ch 14 Why, Just Why. Will The Problems Never End
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    Oh No, I get stuck with Crazy Name that Stuck me with A crazy Goddess!
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior2mth
    Commented
    Ch 36 Chapter 36:- Special Chapter [IV]
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    Naruto : Back to the Past
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior2mth
    Commented

    I really appreciate you writing such long chapters. I just have one issue. I feel like you’re making each paragraphs too big. It’s difficult to read. Maybe try making them shorter.

    Ch 14 Why, Just Why. Will The Problems Never End
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    Oh No, I get stuck with Crazy Name that Stuck me with A crazy Goddess!
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior2mth
    Commented

    I wonder if she would still love him knowing that he had killed her brother

    Ch 304 Mine
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    Riser Phenex isn't a villain
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior2mth
    Replied to ThornedProse
    I have read about Male Haku and female Haku. I have read about the side character's mother becoming the MC's woman. In short, the number of times that I have read about this arc in so many novels is just too many to count. 
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    Naruto : Back to the Past
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior3mth
    Replied to Nox_Caraka

    I don't think he will. Adding this Anime will make a lot of things complicated after the MC is shown to be a merchant this time. He isn't a fighter. Maybe he can hire one of the strongest female character from that anime or something similar.

    Ch 6 Shitty little brother
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    My Stepsister in Kyoto
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior3mth
    Commented

    So this time the MC is going to be a Hero not a villain. That's good to know

    [Will you be willing to become such a hero and walk toward a noble end?]
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    My Stepsister in Kyoto
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior3mth
    Replied to ComradeSujihiko

    now that would be a good plot twist

    "Actually, we came today to inform you about your special identity."
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    Life As Hikigaya Hachiman
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior3mth
    Commented

    thank you for the chapter

    Ch 17 Chapter 17:- Argument
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    Naruto : Back to the Past
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior3mth
    Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

    I didn't bro. When I made changes in this chapter, all pictures and paragraphs comments automatically got taken down.

    [Image of Sakura Haruno]
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    Naruto : Back to the Past
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior3mth
    Replied to Salted_dragon

    Personal favorite

    [Image of Sakura Haruno]
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    Naruto : Back to the Past
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior3mth
    Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

    no

    Ch 12 Chapter 12:- Academy
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    Naruto : Back to the Past
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior3mth
    Posted

    NIce novel has a ton of potential to become one of the best Naruto fanfic on this platform. For now, I am loving the story. The writing is decent and very enjoyable story

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    Naruto : Back to the Past
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Commented

    Thanks so much for the chapter

    Ch 38 Chapter 38: A Choice
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    Danmachi: Divine Enemy
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Commented

    Please don't separate them in the future. Find a solution in which they won't have to separate

    Ch 3 Chapter 3 "A Long Night For Her"
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    My Heroine Accomplice System (18+)
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Commented

    You should start with at least 10. Although 5 is okay but no enough to attract readers.

    I'll be creating a Patreon account soon, how many chapters should I post? 5? 10?
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    Danmachi: I'm Leveling Up In The Dungeon
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