Azure_warrior
I am continuously improving in writing. I am also a reader of various fan fiction and [system] genre novels.
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Bro this novel is good but please keep your rants at the end of the chapter. I don't usually comment but this is getting really bothering. After reading your rants, I lose interest in reading the chapter. I think many other readers feel the same.
I see. Then you can do it at your own pace. Compared to the first few chapters, I really feel that the quality of this novel has increased. Your writing has gotten better.
I really appreciate you writing such long chapters. I just have one issue. I feel like you’re making each paragraphs too big. It’s difficult to read. Maybe try making them shorter.
I don't think he will. Adding this Anime will make a lot of things complicated after the MC is shown to be a merchant this time. He isn't a fighter. Maybe he can hire one of the strongest female character from that anime or something similar.
So this time the MC is going to be a Hero not a villain. That's good to know
now that would be a good plot twist
I didn't bro. When I made changes in this chapter, all pictures and paragraphs comments automatically got taken down.
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You should start with at least 10. Although 5 is okay but no enough to attract readers.