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Azure_warrior

Lv13

I am continuously improving in writing. I am also a reader of various fan fiction and [system] genre novels.

2020-06-19 JoinedUnited Arab Emirates
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior11h
    Commented

    I don't want to criticize the author. You're doing an excellent job. But this whole thing feels a little bit forced. Maybe I feel like this because I know Kakashi's background from the anime and have an emotional attachment to his character.

    Ch 63 Defeating Kakashi and current perks!
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior26d
    Commented

    Tobirama wasn't shown to be that dependent on his Teleportation Jutsu like Minato. Minato's whole fighting style and even his identity are related to Flying Thunder God Jutsu. In the anime, we clearly see him using this Jutsu for day-to-day activities. On that topic - I kind of wonder why he didn't just teleport away with everyone while being surrounded by the enemies. Instead, he went to sacrifice himself to save Sarutobi, Danzo, and others. I don't know if this is a pothole or not. Or maybe I am completely wrong here. You could create theories based on why he didn't use teleportation to get everyone out of danger including himself. This might give you the difference between Minato's and Tobirama's teleportation techniques. Theory 1. Maybe, unlike Minato, Tobirama cannot teleport with multiple people at once. I would have liked to say that he cannot teleport with others but we have seen him teleporting with Naruto and Sasuke in the 4th great ninja war. 2. For this point, you can add it to the first point - Tobirama is incapable of teleporting long distances as fast as Minato could. He cannot teleport long distances with more than one person. As his version of Teleportation Jutsu consumes more Chakra and puts more burden on his body. While Minato has tackled these problems after taking inspiration from Tobirama. This might explain why he did not use teleportation Jutsu. -- I hope these things help. Love your story

    Ch 63 Flying Raijin Discussion
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior27d
    Replied to Azure_warrior

    Doesn't even feel authentic enough.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17: Revelations on the Terrace
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior27d
    Commented

    Chatgpt just ruins everything

    Ch 17 Chapter 17: Revelations on the Terrace
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior27d
    Commented

    Nice Chapter

    Ch 80 Chapter 80 Real Madrid and Barcelona Are Both Unsettled
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior27d
    Commented

    Nice Chapter

    Ch 79 Chapter 79 Super, Super Huge Mistake!
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior1mth
    Commented

    beautiful chapter

    Ch 70 Chapter 70: Ending the Bundesliga Giants' Winning Streak
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior1mth
    Commented

    take care of yourself

    (Sorry guys due to ramadan sometime I just can't gather enough energy to write, I'll be back to normal after ramadan)
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior1mth
    Commented
    Ch 52 Chapter 51:- Special Chapter [XIX] - Rinne Festival
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior1mth
    Commented

    Nice Chapter

    Ch 46 Chapter 46: Another Goal, Lin Quan is the Real Ace!
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior1mth
    Replied to Sir_Squirrel

    Well said

    Female lead is still not decided but let's see, there are many snow leopard even the Wu sisters, the teammate of Master Shifu, and even the snow leopard in Crane's dojo. Even genderbend Peng, Tai Lung's niece.
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior2mth
    Commented

    Bro this novel is good but please keep your rants at the end of the chapter. I don't usually comment but this is getting really bothering. After reading your rants, I lose interest in reading the chapter. I think many other readers feel the same.

    Ch 33 33. Undercurrents of Fate
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    Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Replied to Wnur

    I have read it to 151 chapters. Of course, I know what I am writing in this review. If you don't believe just read the first 20 chapters. With each chapters, things will become more and more interesting.

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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Posted

    This novel is really well written. The plot and the story line is quite interesting. The story gets more and more interesting with each passing chapter. And I really like the spacing of this novel as well.

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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter.

    Ch 38 Chapter 38:- Special Chapter [VI]
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Replied to RikuKage

    I see. Then you can do it at your own pace. Compared to the first few chapters, I really feel that the quality of this novel has increased. Your writing has gotten better.

    Ch 14 Why, Just Why. Will The Problems Never End
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    Oh No, I get stuck with Crazy Name that Stuck me with A crazy Goddess!
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Commented
    Ch 36 Chapter 36:- Special Chapter [IV]
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Commented

    I really appreciate you writing such long chapters. I just have one issue. I feel like you’re making each paragraphs too big. It’s difficult to read. Maybe try making them shorter.

    Ch 14 Why, Just Why. Will The Problems Never End
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Commented

    I wonder if she would still love him knowing that he had killed her brother

    Ch 304 Mine
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  • Azure_warrior
    Azure_warrior4mth
    Replied to ThornedProse
    I have read about Male Haku and female Haku. I have read about the side character's mother becoming the MC's woman. In short, the number of times that I have read about this arc in so many novels is just too many to count. 
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