So GOOOOD. I loved this. You write everyone so realistically, and I really admire that, because everything feels so *purposeful* and so meaningful, whether a deep friendship, a tragedy, gaining knowledge, etc. Everything. I love this. I love you! Also, Kiiiira!
Kaliya doesnt have that burn scar on her head now , right ? Because after madara gave her the healing water it should be cured and new hair have grow out ??!!!
I love this so far your doing a great job if it comes down to it I would love for madara to give a big grand speech telling everyone what his ninja (bender whatever) is and he turns the resort into his own little Konoha
Great chapter! PS: never apologize for extra length in a chapter. The only person to ever have a right to complain about it is your editors hahahaha! /or you if you don’t want to write but feel like you need to close the chapter still/
what happened to the reincarnator/transmigrator that was mentioned earlier in the story? didnt hear about him since then, did the author forget about it?