Comments of chapter undefined of Madara in the Avatar World

I mean to be fair I've read some fanfic where they make the mc suffer for the sole reason of suffering you on the other hand gave it logic and reason so anyone who complains about your writing for the this chapter and the last chapter is just one of those people who want to put people down just for fun keep up the good work!

This chapter and the last one were good. Don't listen to the people complaining about wish-fulfillment.

cool chapter I like that Susano couldn't be sustainable and nearly killed him he's strong but not demi-god level so it makes the story more interesting with higher stakes

toph's lie will mark the end of the contract with Madara, he will end up being treated but then will leave the domain of Beifong. now several points remain in suspense... 1) Jackie will he follow Madara or not, I don't think... On the other hand, I think that he will occupy the position of Bodyguard who was use by Madara. 2) Kiliya's action to save him when she could have taken revenge, will create a relationship of mutual trust between the two. I hope that the MC will assemble a small team of several elemental masters (much like Zaheer). I ask my question again but I wonder how old is Kiliya ?

Will there be a time skip soon? While I like the character building you’re doing, I also want to see madara interacting with the main cast.

Ey tbh I's just boring to read so many stories with those insanely op MC's. What's the point to read a story if you know the MC will win every fight without a scratch... so boring 😪😪😪. I think you found the perfect balance... as all things should be.

I dont think you luckily got a better readership or something, its just that your story is amazing

Jacky is a true bro. Thanks for the chapter.

I love it. I came across this by chance and I loved every chapter. I binge-read every chapter this morning.

this was a great chapter

No problem keep up the good work.

Jackie doing our boi a solid, the man the muth the legend!

I praise you for the masterpiece you are writing and i encourage you to continue on it

yeah no problem doing in a fanfic whatever you want, it just has to be reasonable for it to be a good read. A 10 year old madara not being invincible not so suprising right?

Thanx for the chapter and I hope toph and madara become a couple or siblings like sokka and katara.

Thx for chapter Autor-san I really want to see his improvements to firebending and its subclasses 🥶🥶

Thanks for the great chap! Looking forward to the next battle! Some new reactions to rumors about Susanoo would be col too!