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Otsukihime1yrReplied to ComicDigWhy? 😭
Leaving his old black robes on top of his bed and started to dressing the new robes that the Kyoshi Warriors gave him, the old one didn't fit him anymore.- Otsukihime1yrReplied to G1LGAMESH
I mean Kira, Fei Lan and the Kyoshi Warriors from this story. I know the Kyoshi Warriors as a group is from the original.
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Are you new to Webnovel? We, the community in general, post our fav memes all the time. If this triggers you, you won't have much fun. XD
Red Cloud - Otsukihime1yrReplied to Crimson_King
Jesus christ, dude. All your comments are like this. If you have ideas for a fanfic, go write your own. This one is really good and very much loved and doesn't need to be changed or anything.
"The spirit world exists, so such power should be doable if we bend the laws to its limit, lets see a possible way to make Madara work in the Avatar world, make me a firebender, you can take all the jutsu away sinse chi isn't chakra i just want my talent for firebending being equal to Madara's talent for ninjutsu, replace the chakra pool for an equivalent chi pool, the Susano'o can be treated like a guardian spirit under my control or something and the defense should be roughly similar to Aang on his ultimate Avatar State against Ozai! See? Easy!" - Otsukihime1yrReplied to Crimson_King
Oh no, he has limits, he's a realistic character, he isn't dumbly OP and has limits! 🙄 Your kind make zero sense.
He frowns "I hate being in a kid's body, people don't trust my skills, people don't trust my words... and I can't even have fun... going this far back wasn't worth it at all!" - Otsukihime1yrReplied to rabbit_kunCh 20 Red Cloud
- Otsukihime1yrCommented
Okay, wait, the last comment I made said that was epic and that was epic but this is epic x100 and I am so so so so excited!!!!
Grinning, Madara replied. "A red cloud with white borders on a black field." - Otsukihime1yrCommented
Kaliya <3
Kaliya had displayed loyalty and he was actually surprised about it, after everything that happened on the sea, she had a legit reason to strike him when he was vulnerable and still, she chose to help him. 'Good woman.' - Otsukihime1yrCommentedLao lowered his head in shame "I'm sorry, Madara… I can't keep you around my daughter anymore… My family…"
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Extremely smart
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Yeah, I love her!!!!
Kaliya turned to Madara and said "Can ye believe that? I'm Miss Kaliya now! HA!" she chuckled, and he followed suit. - Otsukihime1yrCommentedCough "Weren't those fruits supposed to be for me?" he could only ask with a wry smile.
- Otsukihime1yrCommented
I actually really like how you write Lao, he's a cool and nice guy.
"To think that I would be forced to behave ungratefully by my own family…" shaking his head, he looked through the window, staring at the sunny day outside 'And he's been out cold since he arrived… How am I supposed to do this?! The level of loyalty that he displayed is not something that can just be bought with money' - Otsukihime1yrCommented
I love Kaliya's description, haha! I wish I could see her!
The problem is that 8 hours later, Madara showed up being carried by a very… well developed… young woman, with an incredibly nasty vocabulary, who ignored everyone on her way and went straight to the guest house while being guided by Lei. - Otsukihime1yrReplied to Whitestair_Ivory
There's a difference between memory and muscle memory. For someone whose body never did a thing, let's say... ride a bicycle since it's a normally used metaphor for this kind of thing. If you watch people ride a bicycle, you can't just go and do it. You need to build up muscle memory in order to ride correctly and not faceplant. The same is, without a doubt, true for fighting and obviously even more so. He has his abilities, he has his appearance. But the body he is *in* has not trained like THE Madara. Whether he was a 4-year-old, a 10-year-old, or in his 30s. He has the muscle memory only from what he's done in this body, so far.
AN: To be honest i was and still am a bit scared of posting this chapter, for the simple reason that it's not all about Madara destroying everyone like the ultimate chad, like it happened on Naruto... well it's understandable, he is not the real madara, he is 11, and he does not have chakra to enhance himself... but regardless... people have their tastes and what they want to read.... and i feel like a lot of people will hate me after this chapter, i can only hope to be wrong... but i have my story to tell, and i will tell it regardless. - Otsukihime1yrReplied to Yogg_Sothoth_666
Right? The wait is so hard!!!! (But I also definitely want him to take care of himself! So I'll be patient!)
Officially Pissed - Otsukihime1yrReplied to Whitestair_Ivory
That isn't how memories work. D:
AN: To be honest i was and still am a bit scared of posting this chapter, for the simple reason that it's not all about Madara destroying everyone like the ultimate chad, like it happened on Naruto... well it's understandable, he is not the real madara, he is 11, and he does not have chakra to enhance himself... but regardless... people have their tastes and what they want to read.... and i feel like a lot of people will hate me after this chapter, i can only hope to be wrong... but i have my story to tell, and i will tell it regardless. - Otsukihime1yrReplied to ZoneTail
XD this is great
"If you dare to betray Mr.Uchiha, I will hunt you down and kill you myself." He said in a low and somber tone while his narrow eyes kept staring at hers.