Comments of chapter undefined of Primogenitor in Marvel

I'm not an expert on these kinds of things so you can choose to ignore this comment. Regarding the sexual scene, it's okay right now but I think it needs slower pacing. Though I suggest not just "telling" or narrating the emotions, but "showing" them. Also, rather than telling them she moaned in pleasure, for example, show it by having her moan. Like this; "Ahn~" It's just more natural to read. Though like I said, it's just my opinions, no need to take them seriously.