Comments of chapter undefined of Primogenitor in Marvel

The beginning of this chapter was hard to read a lot of mixing he and she. Also the names were miss placed was confusing to follow along

just an FYI to the author if you didn't know marvel has it's own version of vampires already in the form of the Blade and Morpheus comics so if you plan to introduce either the Blade or Morpheus series later down the line I'd suggest that you ensure that their's a clear distinction separating the strike the blood vampires and the Blade and/or Morpheus vampires as they would be separate and very different species of vampire.

Thanks for the great chapter . All I really want is for him to go after the Black Widow & Scarlet Witch .

MC has known this chick for like 3 days and is already gonna spill all he's secrets lmO

Já que ele gosta de família numerosa por que não fica com a feiticeira escarlate e viúva negra também?

Doesn't Carol have all her memory read by the kree AI? Isn't telling her about his secrets just stupid? Not to mention he barely knows her but because he liked her in a film he is instantly in love? I really can't handle this much stupidity.

Thxs for the chap

TFTC❤

Ty for the chapter author sama

I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Gud

masss releaseeeeew what a hidden gem

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you

Thanks for the chapter

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