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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin

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jonatham
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Cho Chang

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Ryan_Gaugler
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it's a good story so far keep it up. if you do a harem don't do it to big. it would be ok if it's about 2-3 girls any bigger than that it would be too much. the ones that I think are good would be Luna Lovegood, Hermione Granger, and some other person.

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Sitting_Duck
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Keep up the good work. Love you’re story. Would be cool if he uses nightingale armor like mage robes. Also looking forward towards the goblit of fire part. Him vs a dragon.

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Sol_Acosta
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Lady death and antronach

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Lucas_Sanchez_5451
Lucas_Sanchez_5451Lv1Lucas_Sanchez_5451

An incredible story bro About the female character, well I'm between the twins or Ginny Dating twins gives many comical moments of confusion and even at some point staying with both is interesting Fall in love with a girl in love and steal the protagonist's girlfriend? I don't see anything more fun than that

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Leirbagfcb
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Noooooooo harém please and thankyou. I agree with the people that say about he is too young and stuff. I would rather that he had one or Two different romances that just doesnt work out, just like Life. And theeeeen he will found someone. After all, this sounds more likely and brings a little of reality to the history. The art imitates Life. Besides all this. Thanks for this amazing history, please keep with the chapters. I like specialy about daphne greengrass but think that the MC is too different from her to this relationship work out. Gina in the Books would be a great partner for him or, at least, a Best friend for their free spirit and animation about Life.

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Rusty_Ancestor
Rusty_AncestorLv10Rusty_Ancestor

It would be nice to go full black with Narcissa, Bellatrix and Nymphadora.

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ln_a
ln_aLv1ln_a

I don't want Luna, I prefer romance after he grows up especially since he was an adult there are a lot of novels from Luna as a heroine I'm tired of this 💔🌚

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Zombieee
ZombieeeLv3Zombieee

Thanks for the chapter! Also I don’t really care about the ship as long as you write it to your usual quality!

Ciya_Ciya
Ciya_CiyaLv4Ciya_Ciya

no need for romance till 6th year need lot of one night stand 1 love witch is not a caracter in book plz ( like a magic geek or some one like to became strong witch )

Jayson_Ultrix
Jayson_UltrixLv14Jayson_Ultrix

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Subjucator
SubjucatorLv4Subjucator

update yeeeeees

Miguel_2878
Miguel_2878Lv1Miguel_2878

Loona lovegood <3

raisin_man
raisin_manLv14raisin_man

Bruh don’t ruin this with a harem

hoak
hoakLv14hoak

awesome daphne greengrass and fleur delacour

Jayson_Ultrix
Jayson_UltrixLv14Jayson_Ultrix

Maeve O'Malley best girl.

Shulk_7589
Shulk_7589Lv1Shulk_7589

No harm Why not astoria greengrass

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TyphonWyllt
TyphonWylltLv13TyphonWyllt

Since I just found out that you're back take 3 Powerstones(slides them over like a Mafioso)

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Sarath7980
Sarath7980Lv4Sarath7980

Two of them, we can both get stoned. Or maybe yield them to MC and aunt to see what happens?

lector_enfermo
lector_enfermoLv1lector_enfermo

No harem y si es harem no más de 2. Soy un hombre de gustos simples mi eleccion seria Luna

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Varts
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anyway, do tag me if someone does vote for that umdre something toad