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this is an interesting story so far keep it up. have a mod you can use for them later on in the story it's call Equivalent Exchange. it basically let's the player change things of equal or lesser EMC value for something else. and later on if they have enough EMC and resources they can make gem armor. it can grant flight and other positive effects.
it's a good start of the story.
had a random thought. the twice criticals sacred gear are technically made from the body of Ddraig. and the mc used the left over energy from them to replace his organs with dragon ones. so doesn't make him the bastard child of Ddraig? could work this in the story. but overall it's a good story so far keep it up.
it's a good story so far keep it up. thought from left field for you. you said earlier in the story the the system could be seen by the ancient one. could the system have an avatar or have an actual body to interact with other. kind of like a familiar or something similar.
it's a good story so far keep it up. I know this is based in the world of DxD but with the fact his patron God is a god of chaos. I believe I remember correctly. will this eventually turn into a minor multiversal story. to help his patron out due to the fact that he might have to help him fight his siblings or their champions in the future. mainly ask this is the fact the patron God went to another universe to help him out.