Comments of chapter undefined of The Record of Orc Civilization

As a world builder, I very much appreciate the background and thought put into this world. As a reader though, I question if maybe this knowledge could've come up a bit more naturally in the story. Perhaps some old books which contain some of this information when it's necessary to know it, or similar scenarios. Just food for thought. Thanks for the chapter!

So what i learned so far... all four mana species fight each other. Mana is like an abilities only those with mana organs can use for their advantage. And there are monsters ranked based on their strength. This reminds me of Overlord lores.

Instead of calling the alliance the night elf and wood elf, why not call it the Night wood alliance

Good stuff, not boring to read at all

The Eldar say: “It is just when you think you have mastered a situation that the true test comes.”

A huge info drop huh. It's much appreciated none the less.

boring

good lore

thanks for the chapter

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Good begin with specific world

Very nice world description!