spinning cube

Always read the contract carefully lads, or one day you'll become a skeleton.

"Record what you see"... I wish I had that during my days at high school.

I didn't know author is this kind of person.You got a stone.

As you can see, the air I'm breathing is breathable.

Ayo it's missingno.

This review contains spoiler. I was at around chapter 350 when writing this. I did drop it for a while to contemplate whether to write a review so my memory isn't perfect.Up till first 200 chapters or so... pretty good. Our MC has some development becoming more reliable and strong. That's fine and dandy. However, there's just some parts that of the story that MC that it feel MC intelligence dropped for the sake of the plot.Side characters? Wasted potential! I meant there was good time with cats, the priest and the monster that devour shit. However, MC's grandfather is a fucking wasted potential, we could have more of him planning his course of action, or how the netherworld is run, or the build up for his next plan. But all I get is a sudden game update comes up nowhere and then the side characters explain it. There's no foreshadowing, no warning, just a big here the new villain now lol. The most disappointing is the first antagonist Pangu and his cat. What I see in pangu in the first 100 chapters is completely different what the author shows me in 200 chapters later. Bro just accept the peace deal. Lame! I thought there was a big show down. But nope! There was proxy war but MC hasn't really fought the main force.MC's real dad who has lived thousands of years, killed thousands of gods, seen thousands of dead comrades, get enraged when his son's friend get temporary unalive. Who he had just met for like... a chapter or something. Also MC's friends can be reincarnated anyway so what with that unnecessary rage anyway.How did we get from simple mmorpg online game to an universe inside a cat?Why does people trapped in world 2 want to murder the people on Earth, this was never explained!Why Pangu select Earth as a base of operation when there are other planets. He could just build a planet of his own. After all, world 1, 2 and 3 are products of his power. He could build his own force there, why using players?Why did Pangu said "you will regret and beg me as savior" when he was actually in the fucking wrong and fighting in a pointless war?Things just don't add up by the time you reach chapter 300, everything you learned from the world can be thrown out of the window. The contradictory nature of the novel is shown. The ridiculousness of adding characters to MC's harem then dump them chapters later become so common that it's just about the deaths and look how MC power up when they die.If you want to read this shit, just drop it after 200 chaps, don't waste more time than necessary like me. This is not worth your FP.

A rough hidden gemstone!

Ayo!

I wish for... an anime waifu.

Ghost be:

Noice

You can just write in your usual style. When you finish, you can go over the chapter and split the sentences. It will be less distracting this way.

Ah, what I meant "subject + verb" is a combination of subject and verb. Subjects are: I, you, he, it, etc... verbs are actions that go along with subject. A clause is basically "subject+verb". An example of a clause is "I am a lazy human being". One sentence can has many clauses: "Even if all I'm playing is a non-meta Aromage deck, it's doesn't feel good to lose to something like this". The 2 clauses are often separated by commas, similar to the example. Then there's fitting as many clauses as you can into a sentence. "Limiter Removal is a completely fine card to be played, IF you play any machine deck, and a machine deck is not what he play, in fact the only machine he summoned was Borreload, this means that card is a brick 98% of the time!" This paragraph has 5 clauses in a sentence. Ideally, a sentence should contain 2, maybe 3 clauses. However, if there are 4 clauses you might as well split them. Here the same paragraph with split sentences. "Limiter Removal is a completely fine card to be played. IF you play any machine deck, and a machine deck is not what he play. In fact the only machine he summoned was Borreload, this means that card is a brick 98% of the time!"

Question: does a second meaningful to gods? After all, a second is a unit we define ourselves. Perhaps, gods will use a different measurements unit.

Good question!

I'm talking from my aesthetic perspective. Throughout chapter 1, I notice that almost every paragraph is just a sentence. Ideally, you would want 'subject + verb' 2-3 times atmost in a sentence. Your structure is fine, it's just my aesthetic sense, no fault on your own.

"internally" could replace "(in my mind)" here, I think it will be a better option.

It only applies to 'bronze' monster. I don't know what are considered as bronze monsters. Never saw this buff activate again.

So basically this one allows him to go into the dungeon even if he's level 100+?