Comments of chapter undefined of Chronicles of a Telekinetic with a Group Chat (Archive)
Chronicles of a Telekinetic with a Group Chat (Archive)
RubberPeen
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Well, today I say goodbye to webnovel, which really hurts me, I had many novels to read, but now it's time to download the application and you can't use a translator and my English isn't even decent, so I'm done, bye readers, this message is a waste of time but I needed to vent my pain and frustration xd, bye
Good luck with this, but it is not for me. A bit to much reality bending and wish fulfillment for my taste. He was given: powers, knowledge as doctor, license, company shares=lots of money, more powers. Earned it? With the ease you made it seem fighting those aliens I don't consider that earning it. The most I don't like is that he already has so much abilities and powers he uses one or the other, telekinesis... humanity has always moved towards long range first, if possible, your MC goes backward. The one power most dream of, with considerable strength, you gave him an axe, short range, high danger unless he fights those much weaker. Anyway, I just feel its all over so I'll pass, has potential in a bit more thought put into plot and power progression.
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