Comments of chapter undefined of Playing as a Bender (Avatar: Last Airbender SI)

Man why is it always so hard to tell the truth instead of making all this mess it would have been easier?

what a waste of time, Just show the Royal , never understand the MC's who dont use their status, It's Just dumb

Suki

What happened to your grammar boy?

Mate, the writing quality is decreasing. 1)There are more grammatical mistakes. 2)The scenes are not set up properly. 3)There is a severe lack of description and cohesion in many scenes of the story, there are also some plot holes. 4)The dialogues feel unnatural and weirdly set up. (Also you have an issue with your writing style which forces you to repeat the name of the POV multiple times) Maybe you are pushing yourself too hard. Don't force yourself to upload quickly, I would recommend spending more time in each individual chapter rather than doing multiple quick chapters. Also programs like grammarly are quite helpful.

Always the entertaining chapters. thanx a lot (:

keep roaling

<3

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

Okay

O cara decidiu mentir e abaixar a cabeça, que merda, você tá querendo fazer um mc beta?! Tá parecendo isso.

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter :)

Thanks for the chapter