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god where did the change go step by step? that was terrible, why not just speak with few words like gaara does and start stopping looking like he will kill them at any moment, also if he has so much problem with the mixture of memories he should deal with that before going to train
is that in the presentations I understand that you wanted to give each character their unique personality and all that but it seems to me that they are very eccentric and exaggerated it would not bother me if it were 1 or 2 from time to time but they are very frequent I do not know if I explain myself well, It's just my opinion in general the story is very good
this fight so early with someone so strong obviously went wrong it would have been better with a rear admiral or vice admiral if you want them to put a reward on him and resist genjutsu it doesn't look good either the only way I see in that world to do it is with del haki conqueror
I hope so because having gained 50 points in your stats in 2 months it will be difficult to level up in 1 year, also most level up with stats from 600 to 800 but at least as a protagonist you should bring all your stats to 999 before level up