Comments of chapter undefined of The Martial Unity

Good grammar, I’m hooked to the story so far

Descriptions of the places are beautiful. I especially loved the imagery of clouds shielding us from the sun's wrath. I wish for those on hot summer days. 🥵

pretty interesting so far

thanks for the chapter.

Wow mc is an orphan

I like it...I like it... I'm impressed so far..good writing..good introduction different from other

Those multicoloured hair remind me slighly of anime hair...>_>

id look forward to more chapters same as it started..good novel start

Your writing is good so far. The story is intriguing.

hehe I am already smelling a regret arc with his birth parents

so far it's really good.

Good start

Bro. No dad??

I apologize for the long explanation of coinage in the paragraph comments. Sometimes I just can't help myself.