Comments of chapter undefined of Monarch of Gluttony: System of Sin

you good sir know how to start a story

Considering he wants revenge wrath would’ve been better but he did die because of his hunger so gluttony makes sense. I’m assuming that the Gluttony sin is the strongest of them all because that’s usually how it is.

Mmm interesting start, you have my attention.

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Thanks for the chapter. It was great

This is cool and all but if he just one of seven sin kings doesnt that mean that his power should be equal or similar to the other sins? How would he surpass them and become stronger?

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Wrath too would have been a good choice for the sin.

Great chapter, I enjoyed it👍

interesting story

Weirdly, I was hoping, that the reason for him receiving the sin of gluttony, came from him doing cannibalism, the worst thing you can do when it comes to hunger, but that would maybe be to dark.

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seems interesting but for someone seeking revenge as well, wrath feels more fitting

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Interesting...

okay , first thoughts .... other than the awkward second paragraph this chapter is a good introduction to a story and the writing is smooth , overall its good 👍

Thanks for the chap