The author of the story makes me boring with many struggles, the first one kills, the second one comes stronger, the second one kills, the next one comes, she is a four year old child, I think the author is too stupid.
the mistake of writing whatever i want? i dont think there's a mistake in there, at least try to be subjective, your personal tastes dont mean anything to me or my writing style, and i will not adjust them to your likings
j_y_2113:If it's for yourself, you don't subscribe to others in social networks. If you want to write well, be critical even for yourself and when someone tells you your mistakes, try to learn from your mistakes.