When did I say do as I wish? Write in such a way that the reader will enjoy it and not think that he is working with a delusional writer

If it's for yourself, you don't subscribe to others in social networks. If you want to write well, be critical even for yourself and when someone tells you your mistakes, try to learn from your mistakes.

The author of the story makes me boring with many struggles, the first one kills, the second one comes stronger, the second one kills, the next one comes, she is a four year old child, I think the author is too stupid.