Comments of chapter undefined of The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess

I wish my dad had left me a couple of waifus when he left for cigarettes

Bro it’s not finance it’s fiancée

I hope my father give me 4-5 wife on my 20th birthday. No I am not jealous I swear on my cat's name. My cat-

His father abandoned him but I left him 5 great wives who keep him a little snoring for being forcibly committed to him, it's a win-win.

as long as the characters are decently written and the dialogue doesn't read like it was written by a 5th grader, this could be an interesting story. That said, grammar and sentence structure need alot of work.

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Did no one proofread this story before it came out cause it’s horrible

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its same story as dragon monarch system

Why was he in a coma?!? Wdf

This needs an editor. With better sentence structure and grammar it would be quite good.

i dont get what's happening...

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the first chapter is true chaos

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Time to binge read this entire book

Men I wish I was the. Mc

Hmm I all ready to go in