Mohitkumar
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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
I wish my dad had left me a couple of waifus when he left for cigarettes
Bro it’s not finance it’s fiancée
I hope my father give me 4-5 wife on my 20th birthday. No I am not jealous I swear on my cat's name. My cat-
His father abandoned him but I left him 5 great wives who keep him a little snoring for being forcibly committed to him, it's a win-win.
as long as the characters are decently written and the dialogue doesn't read like it was written by a 5th grader, this could be an interesting story. That said, grammar and sentence structure need alot of work.
hello
Did no one proofread this story before it came out cause it’s horrible
its same story as dragon monarch system
Why was he in a coma?!? Wdf
This needs an editor. With better sentence structure and grammar it would be quite good.
i dont get what's happening...
the first chapter is true chaos
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Time to binge read this entire book
Men I wish I was the. Mc
Hmm I all ready to go in