Comments of chapter undefined of Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

All that info was good stuff. Didn’t feel overwhelmed with it.

give me all the info dumps

Nice chapter. indo dumping wasn't that bad

hopefully you go back over that info later slowly xD that was a lot.

Massive info dump... would've been better if it was gradually incorporated into the story instead. The grammar and way it's structured could also use some polishing. But otherwise, it's decent.

I like how detailed the information on the world is... 👏

The info dump was unsubtle and pretty rough, but for a webnovel, I've seen worse, I guess. It definitely would have served better if you introduced it piece-meal throughout the story as the information became relevant, if not for the sake of the readers, then at least as practice to improve your skills.

An info dump that doesn’t kill me. I see that as a Dub

We need discription of suns blessing

I personally like info dumping, otherwise you barely understand the world

honestly I was understanding it at the start, but most of this stuff feels like stuff I won't remember and wont need to until it comes up later

Egads! The formatting fk my eyes

Not the worst I've seen, but it's much better to try and integrate such things into the flow of the story. At the very least you could have mentioned how he gathered all this info at his age (parents talking, setting through books etc.) Even if it's implied is better to keep things transparent to help readers to see things the way you do.

The info dumb wasn't that bad. you made seem much worse.

Good chapter

I mean I was kidding about the NPC thing....but having a stat window without it being a skill kind of proves his NPCness......maybe?

perhaps all the info and explanation fits better in the auxiliary chapter.

So this world also speaks english??