Nice introduction [img=recommend]!

Are the full stops at the end of the dialogue intentional?

Another great chapter. Thanks.

*They got ambushed* *They said that it was an anomaly or something.*

*periodic table*

Underrated, informational and most importantly, no unnecessary smut scenes. The novel reinvigorate my love for sci-fi especially when it involves space exploration. Hope this author will gain more recognition in the future.

*Milky Way*

*Phenomena* is the plural for phenomenon

*gases*

Might need to rework this sentence especially at NEX2320.

Overall, a good read, but not without their flaws. Firstly, need to work on your sypnosis as first time readers can get confused with the main character's initial name. Next, the introduction is quite steamy but a bit slow. Considering this is the author's first work, it is not a bad attempt at all. All the best!

Thank you. This was a good read.

Thank you. It was a good read.

Yes, when I'm not too busy.

A good read, but a bit rough around the edges. Some sentences and dialogues sounded so fragmented and strange. But, practice makes perfect! So, keep on writing :)

Thank you for your kind words, but I believe there is still room for improvement on my writing. So, let us both do our best.

In short, it was a fair read. Might need to improve on the dialogues as they sounded a bit inorganic. Additionally, some sentences can be rearranged to make them flow more smoothly. Overall, the story has potential, just needs some minor adjustments. So, thank you for your hard work, author.

A suspenseful beginning that quickly develops into a heart-pumping scene. I can't help but sense some Persona 5 influences in some of the sequences (and that's not an insult, by the way). Perhaps when there are more chapters published, I will give a much higher score. Overall, thank you for the experience.

"I am thou, thou art I..."

Fair enough