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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Reincarnated with a system

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Lord_KitiKat
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Just make up your own character Don't use a pre-made template So the plot will not deteriorate and there will be no plot holes.

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LG1
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yamato flees from wano in the midst of kaido's conflict with the navy and somehow arrives on mc island

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Daoist105098
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Yamato

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DaoistJ2BfOl
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Robin or Yamato the both complement the team. It takes a shipwright, an engineer, a sniper, a musician, an information gatherer and two devil fruit eaters

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dippmann
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Plz not Nami, Robin or Hancock every one piece fanfic always makes them either the love interest or harem member I say Yamato

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HellHound
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Yamato!!

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AstrosBR
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Yamato

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bndr
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boa is too much dramatic and he will gurn to ston when she shoot him wit hthe heart unless he is like luffy or is advanced in concure haki , Nami does not add anything to the team , we have the panda for weather , Robin add to the team to find the OP and seems compatiable with mc character in my opinion.

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Sils
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yamato

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Santos2724
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I think Robin is the best for the story you’r e writing ✍️ Boa i think will be to out of touch for the story she has Amazon lily and the cuja to and she can leave but for me it will feel a little forced nami personally i don’t think she is great for the crew Viví i dont see leaving alavasta Yamato I think that impossible first he can’t fight Kaido and don’t tell me she will go and left wano she wants to be the next oden There’s dressrosa princess viola she is far away in the story to make a good plan her devil fruit is actually very op go look for it she can fight a little so no completely useless and you’re already going to fight donflamingo anyway Or you can go for a marine girl you got HINA,GION and TASHIGI And the other that I think is difficult but I will like to see is sanji sister REIJU difficult but not impossible SO FOR ME PERSONALLY WILL LIKE TO SEE ITHER ROBIN OR REIJU THANKS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

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F_150
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Robin

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Lux0013
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vivi

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ArdaPendragon
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Shirahoshi

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Mugetsu353
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Vivi

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shirou_sureiya
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boa hancock

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shirou_sureiya
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hancock

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shirou_sureiya
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hancock and robin hey about yamato

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MIGGER_FTW
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Tank yu for the chapter.

Fausto_Neto
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Since everyone wants yamato, go with her, I also think her character is beautiful, the others are used a lot, especially Boa, foa FanFiction use her, for being a perfect woman, the most beautiful, with a tragic past, including a good story , I found it very cool so far, there are some parts that I didn't like, and I even commented on it, but the story is cool.

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RipSlinG3R
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i think VIVI will play a major role in one piece after wano arc .. imu had pic of Vivi and luffy ..